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Reviews for Movie, Milkshakes, and Domination

By : MTL
  • From ANON - JoeHundredaire on November 30, 2012
    Granted this is an older story and most author's have too much of an ego to revisit their older work when they've improved but... the formatting makes reading an already difficult story significantly worse. And as much fun as you may think showing both sides of an encounter is, you could have easily done so using two chapters for the two girls or two entirely separate stories.
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  • From ANON - Z on November 16, 2011
    More please? This could get some more stories added.
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  • From JohnsonJohnson on September 03, 2011
    Not............ bad............ but.......... try........ cutting........... down....... on............. the............... ellipses.............

    No, for srs. This was a good story, but the gratuitous use of periods made the thing almost unreadable.
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  • From firelarc on November 12, 2009
    intresting story. not just screwing each others brains ut. I was wonderin if there was to be a sequal. Maybe a confrontation with willow etc.
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  • From ANON - Syko_Slayer_13 on May 15, 2008
    god that was so hotttt. i have been craving sub-Tara stories. I think i ruined my chair. lol lookin forward to the next sub-tara story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 22, 2008
    Fun story! Also plausible, which means it's well written. Nice job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 11, 2008
    I really like the story. I hope it wasn't pland as a one shot. It is really to good for a one shot.
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  • From ANON - Lone Voice on March 02, 2008
    this story is reaally goog and i hope that theres more!
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