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Reviews for Tears of the Soul

By : Yourangel
  • From ANON - RAVEN on June 09, 2007
    I love where this is goin....please update....cant wait to see whats gonna happen
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  • From ANON - Merrick on June 07, 2007
    Hi I really love this story and I hope you write more and update much sooner. Want to read more1
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  • From ANON - Sandy on June 06, 2007
    Xander needs to tell them to go stuff themselves.
    Angel and Spike need to do some SERIOUS grovelling first.
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  • From Sagenwarrior on June 06, 2007
    poor xander... i open some wup ass on those two! Good chapter hope to see more soon!
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  • From bubbysbub on May 31, 2007
    UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!

    everyone do the happy dance with me!! hm hmm mmm hm hmm hmmm... do the happy dance!!!!

    ok, so i guess that shocked the hell out of our cold boys, even though it shouldn't. i mean, wouldn't you be freaked if the dudes that almost killed you ten years ago suddenly appeared? and they are suprised?? silly vampys. so i really really wanna know what happens next. do we get to find out what the deal was ten years ago? i am going from this line "Angel and Spike then tried to wake Xander, but he was dazed."-was he drugged? or bashed in the head? that's what i picked up. but what i wanna know is, was vicky right, was he pregnant in chapter one? was that why he wasn't big on the touchy feely? if yes, then what happened to it? and what's gonna happen next, are the boys gonna try and convince xan to calm down and talk to them, or is xander gonna keep with the fearfull rambling- cause i thought that that was quite intense in this chapter. very cool.

    ARGH!! you've done it again, i shall be obsessed with this for the next few days now. constantly checking for updates, moaning and throwing myself at the screen, wheeping and screeching, WHY? WHY HAS SHE NOT UPDATED YET!!! well, maybe not to that extent, i am quite lazy. but i shall be dwelling apon it in the deep twisted recesses of my mind.

    am i full of crap or not? hmmmm. baby brain!!! baby brain!!!

    anyway love, i thought it was another great chapter considering i am hanging onto the edge of my seat to find out what is going to happen!!! these boys are killing me!!! btw, will there be smut? me likey likey smut very much. great update darling. i would leave a review with something more constructive but it is very late at night and i am slightly delirious- though some would argue that that does not differ much from my normal state of being. oh well, there is always the rolled up newspaper.

    more please darling!! you know i love it!!! cookies and back rubs for updates!!! pinky-toe swear!!!

    night night xoxoxo
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  • From Sagenwarrior on May 30, 2007
    good new chapter.. Looking forward to the next one!
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  • From speedie234 on May 30, 2007
    Yay! A long wait but it was worth it.
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  • From ANON - LadyVaughan on May 26, 2007
    Ahh you updated. I love it! it just needs to be longer chapter's. Am still waiting to be told how Xan wasn't guilty of cheating? Can you explain that please? I cna't wait for another update. please update soon!

    ~LadyVaughan
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  • From bubbysbub on May 26, 2007
    aaaahhhh!!!!!! you are such a ruddy tease!!!!!!!!! always ending it on a VERY anticipatory note. always leaves me sitting on the edge of my seat going GAH!! more!!!! loving the concept and the way its going. and of course, my favourite pairing ever!!! mmmm, sexy spike delectable xan and lickable angel, mmmmmmm.
    i am thinking that maybe if i provide some constructive critisism that's positive, you may be inspired to write some more very soon? this has occasionally worked for me, sucking up can go somewhere at times. and as i have nothing else to do today except sit here fat and pregnant and read sexy fanfic, i am going to bore you with my opinion. as usual, if it unwanted opinion (take out the 'pi' and its 'onion'. hmm.) a rolled up newspaper to my nose is quite effective. 'bad bubbysbub!!'
    vicky (addictedtobuffy) is right, you do occasionally switch to a present tense in the middle of past tense writing, but overall, not too much. plus although vic reckons that she is a shocker for this, she actually never does it anymore since i called her up on it, so its not that hard to correct yourself if you are watching for it. so don't get down about her nagging you to get a beta. (yes vic, i said NAG!! ah, grasshopper, i have taught you well! love your guts anyway babe. and as for the whole 'no scars after 10 years and he is still hot'- it's fanfic babe, we can do whatever we want!!) she's just smug that she has a beta, lazy arse b**ch that i may be.
    i know everybody is shrieking for longer chapters but that is because we are all greedy buggers. we want more dammnit!! i would LOVE longer chapters, but move at your own pace darl, i know i am a super slow writer and a perfectionist, so if i actually posted anything (all as yet unfinished- i can't do that to people!!) i would be posting whatever i could finish, when i finshed it. so if we have to wait a week for a short chapter, that's ok, cause if its a case of, a shortie regularly or nothing for ages, you're better off with a shortie more often- keeps us hooked!!
    sandy suggested a bit back that you flesh out the descriptions and expand the explanations a little. i thought this chapter was good in terms of giving the reader a good feel of the emotions of the characters POV and the situation that they were in. so you have done that a bit here and i actually find this chapter to be in need of no more than what you have. sometimes i find that less is more, it has its own charm. plus its the style you write and you will flesh out where you need to. but just make sure that what your readers get from it is a complete picture- they ain't mind readers, they don't necessarily see what you see with the info provided. so just make sure that there is enough there that we can get what you get- if you get me, lol. but chapter five was good. the information that was needed was provided here, and anything else i may crave is open for my imagination. so i say, keep going as you are. your writing will improve as you go anyway and you already have improved from chapter one to five. its all a grand adventure!!
    overall, this fic is the one that i check 'latest' for everyday in the vague hope that you have updated. so UPDATE SOON cause i am dying to know what happens. love love love love. will volunteer cookies and foot rubs and complete adoration for more soon cause its sooo good!!you the chicky-babe!!!
    MORE PLEASE-don't make me beg!!!
    bubbysbub xoxo
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  • From ANON - mandi on May 26, 2007
    Cool!! Really good!! this chapter is kind of short though!! can't wait for the next chapter!! please update soon!! and please can it have an happy ending for Xander!!
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  • From AddictedtoBuffy on May 26, 2007
    Very interesting. Have you been able to find a beta yet? Please update soon.
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  • From demonsnakegod on May 25, 2007
    awwww i feel so bad that xander is scared of spike and angel and i want to know WHY he was sleeping with those other two guys in another chapter. but this is really good. i look forward to you updates keep it going.
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  • From RAVENSLUST on May 20, 2007
    holy shit great first meeting. whats going to happen next? keep it comin
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  • From bubbysbub on May 19, 2007
    well, GAH!! update, woman!!!!! lovin it so far. this is my favourite pairing ever, and i noticed its listed as an mpreg, i have never been able to find an mpreg story in this pairing, so i hope you are sticking with it cause i have always wanted to read one. any way, i am intruiged, can't wait to read more. keep up the good work!!
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  • From AddictedtoBuffy on May 18, 2007
    Yeah this is really improving, good work with the emotions of the characters. One thing I've noticed is that you seem to have the same problem that I do by switching tense all the time. Might I suggest finding a beta, these are the types of things spellcheck can't pick up and just having someone read over and point out any grammatical errors can help the flow and enjoyment of your really great ideas. Please keep going with this I can't wait to see where you're taking it
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