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Reviews for Work in Progress

By : ScarletIbis
  • From ANON - yubi on May 25, 2009
    great fic, kept me interested the whole way =]
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  • From MysticAngel77 on February 20, 2008
    oooooo! That was fun! If that's really the ending, it definitely leaves many many many openings for a sequel since we wonder if Joyce still has the brain tumor, would Willow still go bad magic, what about the nerdy trio, etc. Of course from here you could just re-create the rest of the series, but thats a pretty big undertaking. Was a great story, and I enjoyed your take on Drusilla and the explanation as to why she wasn't all with the intense crazies after drinking god blood.
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  • From WriterChick1990 on February 19, 2008
    awsome ending didnt see it coming at all loved it
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  • From ANON - Millie on January 30, 2008
    It was great to see this post after so long! It was great!
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  • From ANON - nikki on January 28, 2008
    wow excellent hurry can't wait for more
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  • From All4Spike on October 27, 2007
    I started this fic somewhere and then lost it, so I'm glad to have found it again. Your characterisations are just about spot on if you can believe Riley's trip into darkness, which I sorta can. You never know what those Initiative drugs might have done to him after all, and he was getting more than any of the other guys.
    I'm glad you haven't got Spike & Buffy jumping straight into bed together, that would have been inappropriate as they both need time to heal first.
    I'm looking forward to the epilogue....
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  • From ANON - Millie on October 21, 2007
    Loving this story!
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  • From MysticAngel77 on October 14, 2007
    That was really sweet, and I'm definitely interested in the lengthy epilogue that is on it's way! I've enjoyed the ride in your story with your take on Buffy's character - she comes off a lot more mature and not as skittish about analyzing her feelings. I think you recognized that this story could really pull you in and suck tons of your time with all the details you could shove into it (I mean helloooo, tons of characters to go through), but you structured it well so that it didn't get too huge and then unfinishable. Thanks for the add, btw :) I'm sad that you wont be doing any more full length stories, but your one shots are really well written too so I can't complain too much! Goodluck with your real life endeavors, and I really hope to see more of your work at some point. Again, just want you to know that this plotline was a very nice change and I'm glad that it was written well! I hate to see great plots be destroyed by grotesque grammar or OOCness. Keep in touch missy!
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  • From WriterChick1990 on October 10, 2007
    love it
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  • From ANON - Jags on September 10, 2007
    AHHHHH! i love it keep going!!!!!!
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  • From WriterChick1990 on September 09, 2007
    wow buffy just cuts straight to the chase dont she lol
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  • From MysticAngel77 on September 06, 2007
    Ouch! Good ending there! As for having things move along more quickly and smoothly, I wont complain much about how Xander seemed to let her explanation pass easily - and also, given the circumstances of rape, I think anyone would be a little thrown when considering all the facts. Next chapter seems to be a pretty big confrontation! I cant wait :) I wonder if Giles is going to send for Angel to stop by or if somehow the big bad broodyness will find out for himself? What kind of spin would that put on this? /ponders

    Anyways, a good chapter like usual. You're getting ground covered with the key plot members and all their issues are coming together. The next chapter, if feelings are out in the open on both sides, might be difficult unless you pull in some other conflict - unless you're pulling it all together to end it already. It feels like the story is stalling out, which works if it's coming to an end, but if it's not then it needs something more. I dont exactly know WHAT right now (it is YOUR story afterall), though as Kurt Vonnegut said about writing, "Be a sadist. Now matter how sweet and innocent your leading characters, make awful things happen to them -- in order that the reader may see what they are made of."

    I'll stop babbling! :) I hope you can write more soon, but I definitely understand about all the writing blocks - school, social life, lazyness...writers block! etc. Joo can dooo it! I'll be waiting, woo!
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  • From Jags on August 23, 2007
    That was great! PLEASE keep going! grrrr....must have more! It was soooooooooooo good!
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  • From ANON - MysticAngel77 on July 27, 2007
    Can I assume things are going to get much worse before getting better? Xander could really cause some issues here! Really though, that was a nice chapter for reflection and I was really happy to see the Buffy / Riley confrontation. Hopefully everything will come to a head soon with lotsa actiony angsty goodness? :) Continue on with the lovliness that is your writing! I still miss agressive!Buffy though, but this is fanfiction, ne? Tickle that muse for more inspiration to write! Would love to see more soon.
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  • From WriterChick1990 on July 26, 2007
    buffy is my hero cant wait for more
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