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Reviews for The Blue Scythe

By : skylirjames
  • From Daratrazanoff on July 03, 2007
    Update soon!!
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  • From lycanthrope on May 19, 2007
    I am liking this story so far but the guy who said about your use of capitals was right, I know it seems stupid but it can actually take away somthing from the story because people notice it and it interrupts the flow.

    Other than that it is a great start and I hope that you update often as I am constantly checking the site... Anyhoo thanks for a good read and keep going...

    Sarah
    xxx
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  • From KAYZaBAMF on May 02, 2007
    whooo hooo!! update! this fic has got me reeled in so far. im still a lil confused of whats going on but i know it will come in time. i cant wait to read the reunion between faith an abby ... theres probably going to be a few punches thrown. i cant wait!! great fic update soon!
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  • From tsh on May 01, 2007
    great update. I love the flashbacks. They help with knowing what growing up was for Faith before Sunnydale.
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  • From tsh on March 16, 2007
    great update. Wow Buffy works fast. She has never been to Boston, but already has offers.
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  • From KAYZaBAMF on March 15, 2007
    i like ur fic! cant wait to read more!
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  • From tsh on March 10, 2007
    I love the start of this and hope you continue soon, so I can see what happens in Beantown will Faith showing the Summers' girls around.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2007
    looks good. is this a b/f fic or is faith an abby hookin up cuz that would be hott
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  • From DaPhoenix on January 04, 2007
    Your story seems really interesting thus far. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - callistosbitch on January 03, 2007
    Okay, I love you already. You hit King PERFECTLY. This storys gonna be the shit, I can already tell. Just please PLEASE put Danica in it! I love her haha.
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  • From ANON - lisa on January 02, 2007
    you dropped off the face of the earth, but welcome back. hope to see more updates to some of your stories
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  • From ANON - Trish on January 02, 2007
    I think this ia a great concept. Plus the possiblity of Abby and Faith would be so hot together.
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  • From ANON - Cut on January 02, 2007
    Actually, quite a promising start here. Watch your use (or lack of now and then) of capitals in dialog.

    Also...an authors note within a story is a big no. You killed the mood and the set up you had worked to achieve. If you're unsure of something, do a little research. It takes two mins to Google something. Or, if you can't be bothered to look something up, use a different word, or discription :)

    Seriously, never put an authors note in the middle of a story. You're trying to pull the reader into your own personal world with your writing, so don't destroy that world with a silly a/n :)

    A little bit of a summary would be great too. Intrigue is cool...but readers like to know a little of what they're getting into sometimes. Keep it up though, as I said...your writing shows promise.
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