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Reviews for Breathless

By : TDK
  • From ANON - Carmen on August 16, 2007
    I love this story it was beautiful, and romantic and perfect!!
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  • From spikeskitten on July 15, 2007
    this is completely awesome. i'd really like to find out what happens next. can't wait for more to come. this was amazing. i love it! keep up the good work!
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  • From WriterChick1990 on June 18, 2007
    love this. simply perfect
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  • From ANON - feistypumpkin on June 14, 2007
    Can't wait for more. Absolutely love the story!!
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  • From WriterChick1990 on June 11, 2007
    aww poor spike poor buffy. can i please go after lilah with a baseball bat. pretty please. i hope they make up soon cant wait for more
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  • From ANON - genna star on June 11, 2007
    Compelling story.

    The thing that stands out to me is your description of Riley. Was that big of a pain in the ass in the TV series that you made him into an abusive cave man? I don't recognize him in the character you created here. In order for me to get through the storyline, I have had to make his name Larry so i don't feel like he is the biggest jack ass ever.

    Having said that, I have never felt quite like this with the description of a guy's body or ability to make love. I have been reading and thinking about men sexually. It feels like Spike is a piece of meat. I guess he might be, but I feel bad for him. Is he smart? Is he good at his job? Does he have any qualities other than being a damn good lover for Buff?

    When I read the contrast between Spike and Riley---Riley can't get it up and Spike is Mr. Big Stuff---I could not help thinking, do I judge their worth by their stallion status?

    Anyway, I just found the gender stigmatism on the other foot and found myself shocked to be defending a male's value beyond the bedroom.
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  • From ANON - feistypumpkin on June 04, 2007
    What Happens NEXT!!!!!!
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  • From WriterChick1990 on May 27, 2007
    love this more and more with every chapter
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  • From WriterChick1990 on May 25, 2007
    love it dying for more
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  • From WriterChick1990 on May 17, 2007
    awww so cute cant wait for more
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  • From WriterChick1990 on May 10, 2007
    damn that might actually work cause we all know there is defenitley something wrong with Riley's brain. darn and i was so looking forward to him becomeing some gang's bitch. cant wait to read more
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  • From cheysma2000 on May 01, 2007
    This is great. I can't wait for Riley to get what's coming to him and I like that Buffy is showing how she feels instead of being Ice Queen.
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  • From WriterChick1990 on April 29, 2007
    another great chapter but as always dying for more
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  • From WriterChick1990 on April 25, 2007
    love it need more like now
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  • From WriterChick1990 on April 05, 2007
    aww such a cute buffy and dawn moment
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