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By : Starbug
  • From ANON - Douglas on November 12, 2015
    Well, just rubbed one out on chp 5.... and 6, and well, a couple days ago when I started to reread it all, so of course I began with a fine knuckle-shuffle for chp 1. And you came out with this back in 2006?? Been Along time between reads, dude.
    And its why Now I'm making sure I tell you I had Alot of Fun with your `Buffy`.
    I've been going back through all these pages of various Buffy fanfics, looking for What I may have written for a review, and re-found and reread your fine porn! And I didn't see anything from me??!!? So, I now had to correct that, as I certainly remember this Was one I'd read before. So, THANK YOU, Very Much, you dirty boy.
    But of course, as with all my other reviews, I Will comment >Loudly< if I find too much...UGH!! Typos left and right, spacing and format issues to choke a pony. That said, how you slipped in Dawn and Xander FITS! And I love your backstory for Dawn with school in general, and with how she got Kit and Carlos together. Maybe a bit more of How it was with Faith back when S3 and its fallout along with those parts of 4.
    Still and all, you seriously Rock, good writer. Thanks, again.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2006
    No, No, No, please please let me see Buffy (or Faith I'm not fussy) killing Dawn and Xander. Please
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  • From Oric13 on December 21, 2006
    OMG you killed Joe! And Buffy gets a happy ending with Faith.

    I really liked this story and I'm sad to see it end so soon (would've loved to see Joe come up with more humiliating stuff for Buffy to do before he met his untimely demise).

    Voyeurism, humiliation, oral and spank
    Didn't see any spanking in this chapter.
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  • From ANON - Devilfish on September 01, 2006
    great fic really enjoying it!
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  • From Oric13 on August 23, 2006
    Liked it, but not as much as the earlier chapters. It seemed a bit rushed and not as well edited as the previous parts. Some mistakes I noticed:

    ?I?m begging to wonder who
    ?Oh, I?ve had full-sex with more than one man.? Dawn nodded, ?Oh, I've had full-sex with more than one man.

    And too much focus on Dawn, IMO. Would've loved to see some more Buffy scenes.

    My favourite bit of this story was Buffy giving Joe a blowjob during Dawnie's storyteller time.
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  • From InZaneWeTrust on August 22, 2006
    Damn, Dawn is quite the minx in this. You're writing another chapter, right? I mean, gotta love anything with Faith involved.

    Zane
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  • From Oric13 on August 16, 2006
    Oric 13: big fan of your work, so it?s nice to know that you like my work. But there are only two thing I?ll never write; M/M slash and Incest. I know you did ?Thanks for lending me your body, B?, and it?s a hot story (in its given context), but it?s not something I?d be comfortable writing. But yeah; there will be a special treat for Xander?s birthday. But I?m afraid you?ll have to wait until the last chapter for that.

    Nice to hear that you're a fan of my fanfiction. I don't really mind that you're not gonna write Dawn/Buffy - I'm just glad that you'll continue this story. You should write whatever you feel inspired to write, that is what I do.

    Happy writings.
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  • From ANON - NA on August 16, 2006
    Dawns a bitch. I really hope Xander finds out and tells her off. Over all the plot is both distubing and intresting at the same time.
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  • From ANON - Jennilee on August 09, 2006
    Gotta say, the inclusion of other Buffy characters like Xander and Dawn totally makes me lose interest. I'd love a story with BUFFY. Not Joyce, Faith, Giles, Willow and the whole Scooby gang.
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  • From ANON - Smiley on August 08, 2006
    Looks like Dawn WANTS to make money like Buffy has. I don't think it would take much effort on Joe's part to get Dawn to drop her panties too. And with Dawn now running the Summers household and Buffy getting into the humiliation soon she'll be dervicing Dawn and Xander too. Maybe have Faith drop in. Or a fashback with Joe and Joyce.
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  • From Oric13 on August 06, 2006
    Very hot! Love the inclusion of Dawn and I can't wait to see what further degradations Joe has planned for Buffy next. Maybe he'll want the Summers sisters to put on a lesbian show :) Or perhaps Dawn arranges a threesome for Xander's birthday.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2006
    Love it! Go into a bit more detail about Dawn's anal adventures.
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  • From ANON - FallenAngelgirl on August 04, 2006
    Intresting, your adding several good plot points. You might want to have someone perhaps say a vamp or someone give Joe a leasson. You help add payback, and over all this is getting more intresting.
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  • From ANON - Jennilee on August 01, 2006
    Outstanding second chapter (tho I'd love a flashback scene to Buffy's first anal). I hope you don't worry about pushing the envelope, because there's so much more she could be forced to do!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2006
    Great job, just wish you'd written about her manager taking her anally for the first time,but all in all.....more please!!!!
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