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Reviews for After the pain

By : Serinah
  • From ANON - hakrid on October 25, 2013
    I know it's been a long time but don't leave your readers hanging with a never finished fic. You have a great style, please give this fic an ending.
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  • From ANON - Serinah on February 06, 2006
    I'm sorry for not updating. Somehow I'm blocked. I was told that the problem will be solved by march the 1st. I'll try to work on chptrs until then.
    believe me, I'm pissed about it too!
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on January 31, 2006
    Thanks for the update. Buffy still doesn't get it does she? Spike wouldn't mind how she looked; he'd probably just threaten to kill the wanker that did it. More story please.
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  • From ANON - Suzanne on January 29, 2006
    first of all: I'm a norwegian without a dictionary....
    but I really love your fic so far!!! I can't wait to read the next chapters.... please don't make me wait....
    you have capured just the right spirit!
    thanx!!!!
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on January 28, 2006
    It's always interesting that Spike thinks Buffy doesn't want him and Buffy thinks Spike doesn't want her. Pretty silly. I hope Xander sorts out Spike's brain.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on January 25, 2006
    I like the idea of having Spike as a singer! He could actually have some fun.
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  • From ANON - Dee on January 23, 2006
    Just wanted to come back and say sorry about mispelling your name!!!

    :)

    Maybe I need a beta for my comments!


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  • From ANON - karin on January 23, 2006
    like the story very much, it is well written and I like to read more
    thank you
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on January 22, 2006
    WTF are Buffy and Willow and Dawn still doing in their house? Are you going to explain to us how that happened? I saw that somebody already gave you the advice about getting a beta; it's a good idea. If you write more, I'll read it.
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  • From ANON - Dee on January 22, 2006
    Hi Serena

    I got to chapter two but I wanted to point out that you have several spelling errors. A beta is helpful in these things. For example. When referring to Angel by Spike's name for him it is spelled "Ponce" and not "Pounce" which is a verb. Also, Buffy could "counsel" and not "councel". I stopped reading because when you have spelling errors like that it makes it hard to enjoy your story. I think the story you are writing so far is interesting, but you should probably run spell checker and get a beta.

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