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By : elizashaw
  • From ANON - krimson on January 18, 2006
    Great story all around. I loved the little moment of vulnerability for Spike at the end there. It will make it easier for Xander to trust and lean on him if he knows that Spike is taking some scary risks as well.
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  • From ANON - RemityGirl on January 17, 2006
    OH, this was just lovely!! I'm so glad I checked AFF.net and found this wonderful story. I love H/C with Spike and Xander...I don't care who's getting or giving it ...I just love these boys together...all angsty, but loving!! I'm so relieved that I found this story with so many chapters already written...I've been sitting here obsessed, reading it straight through and would have hated having to wait to see what happened at each of the cliff-hangers. WOO-HOO!! Now, I hope to see more of this story...and soon would be nice. See, I'm a hooked already...and really NEED to see what happens next!!

    Thanks for sharing your story!! Is there anyway to know when you update it?? I don't get to check AFF.NET too often. Thanks again for a great story!
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  • From LadyFlame on December 29, 2005
    Wow, what a place to leave off, just as Xander is giving in to his emotion... I hope you post the next chapter soon, and I really hope we have some comfort sex!!
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  • From ANON - krimson on December 06, 2005
    I normally am turned off by ritualized S&M, it seems absurd to me. But you are using it as a narrative tool here, giving it a powerful meaning, and it is an integral part of your storytelling. Storytelling which is smooth, involving and well-executed. Not only do you handle the major characters with grace, but you do a good job with the peripheral characters as well. I must confess, I am still a little uncertain, though, about what passed between Lorne and Angel. Using Lorne to assassinate an ally, albeit a shifty one, seemed so out of character and low that it tainted Angel for me. I was so disappointed in Joss for damaging my enjoyment of the character in the eleventh hour like that. I'd like to see a writer as good as you tackle the issue. Thanks, and I'll be looking forward to future chapters.
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  • From ANON - Zoe on November 28, 2005
    Hi,

    Had your fic rec. to me. Can I just say Wow, very powerful fic with loads of tears and angst. Tissues were most needed. Is it gonna be finished?
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  • From ANON - LitGal on November 27, 2005
    Oh my god... this is heart-wrenching. This is utterly painful and I'm dying to see this pain healed.
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  • From ANON - Angela B on November 22, 2005
    Amazing story, fabulous plot, well written and you are a big mean tease. A peak of plot, a flash of back-story, a whimper of pain, leaving us panting for more. Well done, I'm still recovering, and now, now I demand more without wanting complete satisfaction, I like the tease.
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  • From pixel2817 on November 21, 2005
    Yay, you updated this. I love this story so much and that last chapter is just heartbreaking. I would've reviewed over on lj, but it's still playing up. There's going to be more soon, right?
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