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Reviews for The Strength Behind An Enemy

By : caliadragon
  • From ANON - AuroraLopez on November 13, 2012
    I likes these story very much but is not write right can you send more chapters of The Strength Behind An Enemy,bye. write me back!
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  • From DamianAzrael on December 11, 2008
    Awesome story i'm glad it was updated i had read it when it was only a few chapters long all i have to say is circles within circles characters keep popping up and have strange connections to each other i wonder where it will lead.
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  • From Sakya on February 09, 2008
    It's a very good fic, I love the plot but you keep tossing characters around just for the sake of it and some of them a very out of character. It's very confusing.

    Other than that, your pacing is great, lots of action and a good plot base. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - fire of the lioness on January 13, 2007
    I do like your story, but I?m officially lost with all the characters. I know Harry Potter universe, POTC, Buffy/Angel verse, James Bond, Indiana Jones and I recognise names from Gundam wings and CSI but to be honest it?s too much. And now Ginny and Pansy turned...Okay, but what?s the relevance? The story line becomes very scattered because of this. Maybe it?s time to take a good look at the story and decide what the mainplot is. And don?t introduce too many characters, that only creates confusion.
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  • From ANON - purrfus on August 19, 2006
    Interesting idea, and very brave of you to toss all these fandoms together. As a writer keeping track of all the players must be a task.

    After a while, I started to find it difficult to focus on each character. I think a large part of the problem was because there were so many. After the third chapter I started to feel a little deprived. The pacing of the action was good, but because of the large number of players, there was no time to develop relationships between the members of the different fandoms.

    I will come back to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - meghan on June 30, 2006
    i haven't gotten the chance to read the intire thing yet, but so far i'm really intrested in it. It well written and intresting.
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  • From ANON - shadowraven113 on December 29, 2005
    i love your story it has all my favorite characters and pairings as well as a few new ones please keep this story going till the end

    your devoted reader shadowraven
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  • From ANON - ranni on December 10, 2005
    Loved it!!! Keep the chapters rolling!!!
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  • From ANON - Saiyukianime on December 06, 2005
    How could you bring such harm to my Xanny luv he does not deserve the pain and suffering he's gone through...Your Dispicable. I like Xanny as a genius and all his inventions are COOL. More CHAPPIES!!!!
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  • From ANON - Saiyukianime on December 06, 2005
    Wow, quite emotionally charge isn't it? I love how you made the two Willow and Xander have a connection with one another way cool! And I hate you for hurting Xander so badly mentally and physically, CURSE you...not! I love it pain, suffering, and all that zazz makes me want to tear all the bad people who causes the harm to shreds Die Evil people!!! Come to me my little sweet Xanny Poo. Booy do I seem a bit insane to you? Sorry bout that I haven't taken my medication yet now where did I put it Whereeeeeee diiiiid Iiiiiii Puuuuttt iiiiitt!!! Come out come out wherever you are. What? What are you doing with that Xanny poo? Put that down I need my Sugarrrrrr! It's my medicine I can live without it NOOOOOOO!!!!! Caught it just in time crunch...munch...crun...mmmm> Well, I'm better now. I feel sad for Elliot he gonna have a hard time ahead of him. I'll wish him Good Luck!!! I really thought you were gonna pair Xanny-chan with Riddick I really wouldnt have mind or end them as a threesome with Eric, ut I like what you did too. MORE...I HUNGER FOR MORE XANNY CHAPTERS!!!!
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  • From ANON - saiyukianime on December 06, 2005
    I just love the way that you've written this story. And it was quite unique of you for having incorporated the television show into the story. Poor Xander and Willow! Damn that Buffy for lying to him and damn xander's parent for torturing him, die you BASTARDS!!! Okay, Saiyukianime Breath in, breath out, in and out, in and out. Okay I'm cool now, sorry bout that it's just I'm very sentive about these sort of things. NEways keep up the good work and can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - ky on November 29, 2005
    was fu'n great i sooooo can't wait for the next chapters don't take to long writing them
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