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Reviews for Broken Revenge

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  • From Viktoria on June 12, 2009
    wow this story has been SO amazing. the best part is that I really thought I wouldnt like the sequel. I've read the first story twice or more and I love it- its one of my favorites. But I just wasnt sure were this would go- and it did take me in a hundred directions I'd never seen comming but was beautiful beyond my own imagination. It has a quirkiness to it even in the darkest times so that even when your heart is torn, theres something to make you smile. It's life.
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  • From Viktoria on August 13, 2007
    I a finding that I'm not really as absorbed in this fic as the first one. I was rooting for xander throughout the last one but I just dont really care either way in this story (most likely since I dont want him to find that girl and I dont see the big deal about the child [he is after all only an 'animal']) . I'm upset to see that xander has regressed to the mindless puppet (things seemed to have been getting better!) Not sure wether thats because of his capture or being forced to "play" slave.
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  • From brroisaer on February 17, 2007
    Your stories, Broken Revenge and the one preceding it, are amazing! I have to be at work tomorrow at 12 pm and here I am finishing your fic at 4:20 am. lol. I really enjoyed them, thank you for taking the time to share.
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  • From ANON - purrfus on August 21, 2006
    A page turner. Couldn't wait to see how it ended but I didn't really want it to end.
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  • From ANON - Speciallymad on July 25, 2006
    Brilliant. I mean, astounding. >.< I almost started to cry at the point where is Xander is taken with Dareh the second time. Don't know why, guess I'm just weird like that. ^.^
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  • From ANON - windandsummer on January 31, 2006
    wow. simply wow, I read the first one awhile back and I had forgot you were going to do a sequal. Recently I was looking over what storys you had and saw this. I got to say that while I absolutly loved the first one, this one is even better. My heart breaks for Trista, but this story is so beatiful and I love how Xander starts to act more as a person in his own right. This story is your best ever, and some day Id love to hear more about Amanda. But even if that never happens I like to say cutos for such an alsome story!
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  • From ANON - Kagaya on January 27, 2006
    That was a beautiful ending.

    Will you write a sequel?
    I would like to see Spike in the over protective Dad mode when Amanda has guys knocking on her front door.

    ^_^
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  • From dmalfoy on January 22, 2006
    Beautiful chapter. I like the way you got into Trista's head. Wonderfully written.
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  • From ANON - nomad on January 22, 2006
    Beautiful end.
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  • From ANON - rngrdead on January 22, 2006
    What an extraordinary end to a beautiful, at times terrifying, and exceptionally well authored story!

    Thank you so much! I wish you would write more in this canon but also sense that the boys are happy and we should leave well enough alone...

    Blessings and hugs for sharing your talent and creativity

    L
    J
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on January 21, 2006
    Oh, wow. Two chapters in one day. Woo hoo! And another wonderful chapter at that (like you could produce anything else). More soon I hope. I love the fact you went into Trista's head, though it would be nice if she could write or something to let them know that she's alright.
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  • From ANON - catsim on January 21, 2006
    Oh....how absolutely wonderful. While I wouldn't have minded reading all the inbetween bits with Lashar's death and the birth of Amanda, that's okay. You let us know what had happened just fine, with all those little sentences and Xander's thoughts.

    Loved this story. Will love it for a long time. Is there another chapter, since this one is Epilogue 1? If there is, I'll wait, and then print the whole story out. I've the orginal story already, and I'm eager to add this to it.

    Thank you so much for putting your thoughts and ideas into 'print' for us lowly readers to read. I could write fiction, once, but my kidneys packed up a few years ago and now I just can't string words together in a fictional setting. Darn toxins.

    Ahem. Again, thank you. And if you want to continue this story with perhaps Amanda growing up, I'm sure that we, your humble readers and worshippers, wouldn't mind.

    Love ya

    Cathy
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on January 21, 2006
    WOO HOO!!! We have BABY! Wonderful chapter and good to know a little bit about Trista. Now it looks like they're going to have to work on fixing her, but I'm guessing that's the next story. It looks like you're planning on an another epilogue, so please hurry.

    *BTW, the don't tend to cut the umbilical cords that fast these days.*
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  • From ANON - Kagaya on January 21, 2006
    Oh my, that was so sweet.

    I love the frantic, worried, crazy Spike. Only a family in danger can do that to him.

    Kyaa. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kagaya on January 20, 2006
    Ah...a sort of closure to the torture of Xander's slave days.

    And that was so sweet the Spike and Xander banter.
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