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Reviews for Protective Custody (1/20)COMPLETE

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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 05, 2005
    It's very nice so far, but...and don't you hate those...Xander either has one eye or two. Please pick.

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  • From Tisienne on October 05, 2005
    Very interesting... can't wait to see where you take this next! *grins*

    Loved the 'Back to the Future' reference, btw... wonderful!

    ~Tis
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  • From ANON - HarleyD on October 05, 2005
    RWAR! Hey there, fantastic story! (xander on top.. yes?) I can't wait for the next chapter! great story!
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  • From ANON - Alice on October 05, 2005
    Oh god, this is so funny and very yummy. I love it and want more.
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  • From ANON - Christine on October 04, 2005
    Awww! I feel so bad for Xander! He is having so much trouble dealing with the fact that he is attracted to a man...and...that man is Spike. And all Spike does is make it completely worse....I know, that's how Spike is. But, I can't wait until the point where Spike gets over himself and stops chasing after Buffy and goes for Xander. It would be awesome if Xander gets all upset because Spike acts like he doesn't want him, and then, just when things seem so terrible for Xander, Spike gets over Buffy or whoever he is hung up on, and goes after Xander. But, it's your story and I'm not gonig to tell you how to write it...just an idea. Hehe.
    Anyways, I hope these two can figure things out and why they can't leave Xander's apartment...that's kinda freaky.
    Please post lots more! I want to know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 04, 2005
    Seems the Powers That Be have a really sick and twisted sense of humor. Great job, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 03, 2005
    Hurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryuphurryup with the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Merry on October 02, 2005
    I really like this and would love to read more! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 02, 2005
    The traitorous body parts will get you every time. Great job. Keep it up and more soon please.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 01, 2005
    Very cute so far. Typical of Spike to be a jerk. A couple little spots you goofed, but that's not to bad. At the begining of the story you mention that Xander has one eye. In the third chapter you have him with two eyes a couple of times.
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  • From ANON - nokia on October 01, 2005
    great start, i love it already.the last lines of chap. two were just classic.
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  • From ANON - pat on October 01, 2005
    this is darling, keep going ,love spike and zander storys thankyou
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