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Reviews for A Spandery Fairy Tale (part 1 of 6)(*Complete*)

By : Virtualpersonal
  • From asydnes on March 06, 2007
    While I've rarely read even AU Human stories, much less anything more fanciful, I have to say that I really enjoyed this one. It was at times sad and frustrating, but overall, it was really sweet. :) Nice Job!

    As for people not leaving much feedback here, it appears to be happening in more than just this fandom at AFF. I've been writing for nearly four years now in the Lord of the Rings' fandom, and we've noticed a dramatic dip in reviews posted as well at this site. *sighs* It seems that people would rather lurk than let someone know how much they liked a story. Too bad as that isn't very helpful for the authors who use feedback to gauge interest in plot direction. *sighs*

    *Mwah*
    Dae
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  • From ANON - In2lalaland on January 14, 2007
    This was a really nice story. Ever thought about giving it a epiloge? :)
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  • From ANON - Serinah on January 22, 2006
    I just read the other reviews. I wanted to add that one of the typical mistake I found was mixing up your/you?re. I don't know if there's more...
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  • From ANON - Serinah on January 22, 2006
    I don't usually like M/M stories as I'm straight female myself. But your was interesting and hot at times. I loved the angst. At first idea of Spike being a Fairy was really strange. But it turned out fun. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - adorinea mae on October 01, 2005
    loooooooved the story write more
    i really liked the different take on spander!!!
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  • From ANON - Jen on September 30, 2005
    I'd love to have a picture of Spike the vampire fairy :D Brilliant story! Is the sixth part really gonna be the last one? I really enjoyed your story and hope you'll continue it!
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  • From Windandsummer123 on September 30, 2005
    i loved it thanks for the quick ending!
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  • From ANON - miyu on September 30, 2005
    That's a beautiful story.
    All of it, I mean:-)
    You know, if you have some more ideas like this,
    you should write some moreof the story.
    Would you be so nice?


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  • From ANON - Christine on September 30, 2005
    Oh my gosh!! I LOVE this story soo much! This is so adorable, the way that it started with both of them when they were younger. I feel bad for Xander that he had to go through living with an abusive family pretty much by himself since Spike left. Hopefully, Xander can learn to forgive Spike and to trust that he won't leave again. Please post a lot more! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - CC on September 30, 2005
    I am enjoying your story very much. It is interesting and a different take on things. I wasn't sure what to expect from the summary and especially the title (which maybe needs some rethinking) but I am pleasantly surprised. Can't wait for the end. As for the number of reviews, well they are obviously way out of proportion to your hits. What is more important - that only seven people read it but 100% of them comment on it or that 252 people read it and only a few comment on it? If you are not getting enough feedback to help you improve your story or work on some points, try showing it to other writers that you know or friends and/or family whose opinions you trust.
    Critcally speaking, your narrative structure was good and your dialogue was natural and flowed well with the story. I noted only one obvious typo (can't remember exactly what right now, bnut it was the transposition of some letters). You could do more with description of place and setting, this serves to help ground a story.

    I hop the above notes help. Regardless, I wish you good luck with your writing. And let's get that last chapter flowing!
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  • From ANON - Alice on September 30, 2005
    Aw, this is so sweet, I love it! Makes me all mushy inside. But yeah, you should usually beg for the reviews here. Don't get too many of them here. But I love this story and I want more of it. I demand more!
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  • From Windandsummer123 on September 29, 2005
    please review i love this story it is so good and very oringinal!

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  • From Siarra on September 29, 2005
    I'm surprised that this fic hasn't been reviewed because, quite frankly, it's a great story. But around here getting reviews depends on so many things it's not even funny.
    You've written this fic very well and the characters are wonderful. A truly angsty Xander is difficult to write well but you've managed wonderfully. His bitterness is practically tangible and the way you've built Spike's character in course of the story is great. The storyline is well done and I'm not usually even remotely interested in fairy stories because they tend to be sickly sweet, but this one is good.
    I can't wait to see this one continued.
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  • From ANON - miyu on September 29, 2005
    Keep that up!
    The story as far as you posted it, is really amazing.
    Usually I don't like fairy- stories 'cause they get awfully sweet,
    but yours avoids that very nicely.
    Spikes behavior and Xanders reactions also suit them,
    just don't get too angsty, that would spoil the story.

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