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Reviews for The Adventures of Deadboy and Zeppo

By : LitGal
  • From ANON - becky on July 31, 2013
    OK so I LOVE your work. I have read every single one of your prices on here and I like them all. When I have time I'm going to go back and give a very detailed review....cause that's basically my way of praising your work, pointing out the few mistakes, the more I find the more you know I love it :). But this one has me in more knots then I know what to do with.in love it a lot, but I'm not sure about the whole completely killing xander soul thing, can't you find a way to bring it back and it not be a curse. In the Halloween one he is a fuckin bad ass who couldn't give to shits about a random stranger but still had a soul and was still him, just....a little evil. (And I have only gotten to chapter 5 of the second have of that cause your site isn't working for me :( so I don't know how that ended but hopefully not with him being turned cause that would, in my opinion change everything I like about him). So basically I loved the whole its still xander but now he can eat people thing, but its not xander cause what made him him was not just his humanity but his kindness and his soul. So the end when angel hoped his soul found peace I found my self hating the vamp a lot, which I don't like cause I love how you made xander come across. I don't like the think that xander is dead and this is a demon that is kinda human and acts like xander cause of the memories. So if you plan to make a second one I really hope you either make me fall in love with the demon xander to the point I don't hate that he is not really him, or you bring back xander without it being a curse (I honestly would make it so he was there the whole time just repressed but still pressing his humanity into the demon, and some spell or trinket wakes him up complely), and there is a lot you could do with the government now bring angel contracts (make your own version of the hellboy project) and don't get me started on how I really want to see every in sunnydales reactions to all of this. Yep, I am really looking forward to a sequel. Maybe even a moment where spike and xander fight to settle the score once and for all. Since they can fight with xander being a demon. And another thing that has nothing to do with this story but with you in general. Can you try your hand at a xander X oz? Or xander with hyena demon in him and human soul too? Cause a xander listening to animal instincts could lead to a lot of possibilities ;). So ya, that's all I have for now, if you could please email me when you update any of your work, or when your site is working again, thanks.
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  • From bloodravyn on November 26, 2010
    update, please?
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 07, 2005
    Wow! Great story as usual, but wouldn't have minded a bit more detail during the bedroom scene.
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  • From pixel2817 on October 07, 2005
    I loved this. You write a great Xander.
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  • From ANON - Christine on October 06, 2005
    Awwww! This chapter was sooo sad! I can't believe that Xander is thinking of killing himself! What a twit! I'm glad that he and Angel are gonig to talk, Angel needs to let Xander in on what went down on his "kill mission". And poor Cordelia. I hope that Angel and Xander come to some sort of an agreement or that something is figured out. Just don't kill Xander!
    Please post lots right now! I need to know what's gonna happen next!
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  • From ANON - selene on October 06, 2005
    awww, poor xand and cordy!!! more please?
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  • From ANON - Alice on October 05, 2005
    ACK! need more, I love this story, and I like that Xander is still all Xandery. Full of Xandery goodness. I Like this very much!
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 05, 2005
    And yet another great chapter. How do you do it? At any rate, keep it up and update soon please.

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  • From ANON - WolfMama on October 05, 2005
    Excellent chapters! Wow, more please? Mr Perceptive really made Angel look at himself huh? I wonder if there's a chance for Xander to get his soul back too? I just wanna go to Sunnyhell and beat the living daylights outta his so called friends..Jesus, if they really cared about him that much they never would have treated him like that, they woulda tried to help any way they could, and they have to know the soul restoration spell, don't they??
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  • From ANON - Alice on October 05, 2005
    OH, this rocks! I like it, more please!
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  • From ANON - Christine on October 04, 2005
    Yay! Go Angel, the vamp with a plan, he is kicking ass! I hope that he gets Xander back and that the two of them can work out whatever relationship that they have together. Xander really needs some help right now, I just hope that Angel is willing to give him that help.
    Please post lots more, I want to know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 04, 2005
    I'm surprised that the guy didn't soil himself. Hurry with the next chapter please.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on October 03, 2005
    Sneaky little Angel. Always has a plan. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon please.
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  • From KagetsuAsame on October 03, 2005
    Poor Angel, the truth hurts, doesn't it? I love it and can't wait for the next part, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - gact on October 02, 2005
    At first I thought I was going to hate this story, but I'm beginning to love it.
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