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Reviews for Wheel in the Sky

By : MrsMuir
  • From ANON - mellissa on September 13, 2005
    I'm really happy to see you continue with the characters from your Ain't No Sunshine story. Looking forward to see what you have in store for Buffy and Spike.
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  • From ANON - Shuli on September 12, 2005
    Can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - Brunettepet on September 12, 2005
    Lots of excitement in this chapter, pushing the plot forward. The drive-by was a surprise, and the emotional aftermath for Spike and Buffy was well written. The still raw emotions between them are going to be interesting to explore while living under the same roof. At least they'll have Cassie for a buffer.
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  • From ANON - becky on September 12, 2005
    oh please give us more!!!
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on September 10, 2005
    Not only do we have to save Cassie, there will have to be a lot of painful angst to get any Spuffy here. Poor Fred. More please.
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  • From ANON - kelly on September 10, 2005
    OMG, that was awesome. i dont mean to sound rude BUT FUK FRED OFF. lol her and spike uh uh nopes, not workin.

    i hope that whilst buffy spike and cassie are in the safe house b/s hook back up that waould be so sweet.

    anyway that was a chapter well ritten and i hope you update it again soon


    kelly
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  • From ANON - Burnz on September 09, 2005
    Yippie more WITS! Wow that was exciting. I also love Kates attitude she has quite a strong personality it is good to "see" her again. Buffy and Spike forced into close proximity I can hardly wait!
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  • From ANON - Lucysky on August 29, 2005
    First of all I LOVED Ain't No Sunshine! When I saw you are writing a sequel I just had to start reading. What happened!?!?! I really, really want to know how is it that Spike is with Fred instead of Buffy. What went on during those four (?) years? I'm sure my questions will be answered in due time. I love that you're writing a sequel and I can't wait to read more, I'm already hooked!!
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  • From ANON - CrazyRamblings on August 23, 2005
    I absolutely loved the first story, so now I can't wait to find out how Buffy and Spike could possibly have drifted so far apart! PLEASE update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2005
    good job
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  • From ANON - becky on August 22, 2005
    ooh from reading the comments its a sequel so ill be goin to story number one now hehe XD
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  • From ANON - becky on August 22, 2005
    good starting point cant wait to read more details of her past and whats comin up next
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  • From ANON - Lans on August 20, 2005
    I for one thought this chapter was great and that this story is promising to be just as great as it's prequel.
    Reading Ain't No Sunshine should automatically tell everyone that the author has some GREAT plot points that will be worked out. So no, it's not just a simple movie twist or something equally as lame.
    And hey, anonymous -- if you want your critique to actually hold some weight -- then don't be anonymous.
    Lans fr Toronto

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  • From ANON - Lara on August 20, 2005
    I'm very excited to see you have decided to write a sequel. And I can't wait to read more.

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2005
    One of my main complaints with movie sequels is that they feel the need to have broken up their main couple a long while ago and put them with new people not really ever giving a proper and logical explanation for two people who it seemed would never in their life separate to break up.

    This being said, I certainly hope there are believable reasons other than "...it's just more fun to see them get together / back together" for this turn of events in your story. Yeah they both had changes to make, long distance relationship, yadda yada yadda...who cares. One of my least favorite pairings is Spike and Fred in any form. Fred is in no way Buffy's equal and could not possibly replace Buffy for even two seconds. In this story Spike must be very unfulfilled in his current incarnation. I can't imagine him being happy with anyone else after having Buffy and losing her. Long distance relationship my ass, chase her to Seattle lazy bum Spike. And for him to be with Fred, a girl that Buffy was already jealous of... I loved the previous story, but I don't know if I can take this. Yeah yeah I understand as a writer you can do whatever you want with them Joss...I mean MrsMuir.

    Alright I've ranted and admit you probably have me to torture still with this. *sigh*
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