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Reviews for Two Slayers, No Waiting

By : TammyDevil666
  • From VanillaLatte on May 02, 2009
    I think it was well-written for a beginner at smut. My only advice at this point would be to slow it down a little and delve deeper into the imagery and emotional aspects. For instance, Buffy probably would've been a little more hesitant and Faith probably would've had to do some more persuading. I do like your writing though and it was a fun read :)

    Best wishes,
    Vanilla Latte
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  • From on March 26, 2009
    Good stuff! I'm a BIG Faith fan and I think you captured the real characters well...they spoke as they do on the TV show pretty much, especially Faith. Well done.
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  • From ANON - becky on July 27, 2005
    hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
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  • From OracleOfMagic on July 22, 2005
    Not bad! Totally fuckin hot.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2005
    great work! i never would have thought that you were new!
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  • From ANON - erin on July 21, 2005
    that was great for a beginner
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  • From nik1styles on July 20, 2005
    not bad... i think it could have done with a little bit more before they got straight to fucking, but overall, i thought it was pretty good ;)
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