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Reviews for Xander and His Pack

By : MistressTitania
  • From jgoodman on December 25, 2009
    good story, please update soon
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  • From pontaloon on August 17, 2008
    I like how you took the time and effort to really describe the new den. It gives me a feel for the place so im not totally lost. Its kinda weird how Xander calls Spike darling though. OMG I love the ?orgy that is not an orgy? in ch3. it?s like a pile of puppies! Aaaawwwwwww! Update sooooon! Xander and Spike still have to ?comfort? Andrew? make it pervy? ♥Pweez♥
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  • From kriskei on January 04, 2008
    Very nice and i want more plz? xander as the alpha and spike as alpha-beta....and andrew as beta? wow never would have thought of that mix. :)
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  • From ANON - rage on October 05, 2007
    this story is so good, even if its sad. i hope ya add more soon i want to know what happens. And just a side note i hope that little b***h of a father dies very painfully. hope to see the next chapter soon, bye.
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  • From demonsnakegod on July 01, 2007
    i love this story! i can't wait until you update again!
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  • From ANON - Desert Rose on June 07, 2007
    I really love your story. They way you protray the characters is really awesome. I coudn't stop reading it. I really hope you update soon. Just one question, what are you going to do with Angel?
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  • From ANON - VicKiss on December 09, 2006
    Hey! Haven't you gotten any rewievs? You should be swamped with encouragement on this fic. I just found it and it's cool. I know it's been a while since you updated and perhaps thats beacuse of the unforgivable lack of response you've received.But I want more! Let's make a deal! You update n I rewiev! Okay? I've got some advice for ya. Bring out the personalites of the pack members! Give them integrity! Perhaps a patrol to show off skills... Andrew and Xander could surprise Spike. And you do know that I expect something to happen for Andrew to get pregnant. He wants it. Xander must claim his mates soon. You see, I've got suggestions for plots and there's more but you have to ask for it...........Hope to see more
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  • From ANON - AddictedtoBuffy on November 01, 2006
    Hey from new author to new author great story. Just a couple of suggestions. Angel should side with the boys. And the big bad could be the initiative it would be interesting. Some scenes are a little rushed, try and flesh it out some more as well when the three boys get together maybe Andrews a bit apprehensive due to past experience. Keep writing
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  • From ANON - purrfus on August 22, 2006
    Interesting ideas. The story line is a little rushed. As complex as your concept is it would be better to take a little more time and share information as part of conversations, etc.

    I would like to know more about the elf types. It has been awhile since you updated this. Are you planning to continue?
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  • From ANON - Neila on August 10, 2006
    I love this story. Are you going to update it anymore? Please e-mail me if you do.
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  • From ANON - on October 06, 2005
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - lena on August 15, 2005
    mistress, you are mean. you need to update this has real potential to go in to the double didget chapters. you really need to get on the ball and spit out the chappies here. every time i get on i check your work for updates. have you gone to the congo or fallen off the edge of the planet? UPDATE!!!! pretty please.
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  • From ANON - spikeprop on June 13, 2005
    a heads up, the term Pillow Biter isn't used very often in the United states. Willow probably would have used a discriminatory term more common to the US like F*G or Cocksucker, something to that effect.
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  • From ANON - Bella_Morta on June 11, 2005
    I myself have enjoyed this story so far and would really love it if you countined to write it.
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  • From ANON - Shady on June 11, 2005
    really enjoying this one
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