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By : norwalker
  • From Zarrthtion on April 04, 2010
    An awesome story i loved every minute of it ur very good at adding twists to your stories and its nice seeing dark willow back i miss her but all-in-all a wonderful fic.
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  • From lycanthrope on October 16, 2007
    well i liked it. ok ok more than liked it i've been glued to the screen for days. litteraly.



    gatta say was loveing your little 'pulp fiction' way fo telling the story. Tarentino would be proud.



    and the happy ending. allways love a happy ending especialy after all the crap they went through.



    also LOVED the way you tied the begining into it when i though you'd just forgoten about it. thats some memory you gatta love it.



    ok i think that enough praise for now dont you? it's never enough but i can see myself going on for a few pages and if i do that i'm going to be dragging you away from writing anything else which i will be reading :D



    lycanthrope
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  • From ANON - lilyme on January 06, 2007
    Man, today is like Christmas, Easter and birthday in one! 27 chapters (or so) of Fillow-y goodness! I can hardly believe it. I'm one of the biggest Fillow-freaks ever :))

    And why didn't I stumble across this story before?! Now I know what I'm gonna read in the next few days.

    I know one thing: I love this story already :D This is going to be good (I can tell because I know and love a lot of your other stories already!)
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  • From ANON - Distantskyking on September 10, 2005
    Now here is something that I don't agree with so I quote Aberahamtulip:



    Aberahamtulip says:
    I honestly feel like this is a terrible ending for this fiction. There's so much you haven't really dealt with.



    Distantskyking answers:
    I don't feel/think this is a terrible ending of this fiction and there might be so much the writer hasn't dealt with that may be true, but THAT only makes the possibility for a sequel that much bigger.



    Aberahamtulip says:
    And the time jumps near the end just make this worse. In fact they make the whole thing very unbelievable.



    Distantskyking answers:
    hmm.... haven't really been paying good attention have you?! *arches left eyebrow* probably not anyway....



    Aberahamtulip says:
    In the future I'd try and keep the time line more compact, because even with true love a relationship will die within a month of not speaking. And even if it wouldn't in real life, it seems unbelieveable when it's read.



    Distantskyking answers:
    Now THIS really, really is bull what you're saying of course true love won't die within a month of not speaking or else it wouldn't have BEEN real love all along *roll eyes* to begin with (duh) ttsss....

    No it wouldn't in real life I know examples and you know why it's so unbieleable when it's read.....? That's 'cause most of us people in real life DON'T know what REAL LOVE is, we DON'T know the value of REAL LOVE, we fall in love to easy and we fall out of love that much easier, we are always confusing "to like" with "to love", but do we even realise that those are two different things? Probably not! And so we might never get the real meaning of the biggest emotion in the universe......


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  • From ANON - Michiru Loves Haruka on September 10, 2005
    *sighs content* I'm so happy it had a happy ending for them. Goddess this fic was very, very intens lots of heartbreaking moments. I found myself brushing some stray tears a lot throughout this fic.... It rocked me to my core!

    You're good, you're VERY good at writting these fics you always manage to write something mind BLOWING!!! With all the good ingredients, romance, tragedy, action, sex....., your fics got it ALL!!!!

    And I can't wait for the next one and I really hope it's a Faith/Dawn (an off age Dawn afcourse) fic this time around.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2005
    Really enjoyed this story,and I'm not a fan of Faith/Willow at all. Not sure what the person meant who said even true love relationships can't last through a month with no talking. Of course they can,and in this fic it made all kinds of sense. Nice job!
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  • From ANON - Alison on April 30, 2005
    Great story, I'm sorry it's over. A sequel would be great, or maybe you could do a fuffy story of such epic proportions as this one cuz I loved this fic even when W/F isn't my fav pairing, so image how spectacular a B/F would be. :P
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  • From ANON - Aberahamtulip on April 29, 2005
    I honestly feel like this is a terrible ending for this fiction. There's so much you haven't really dealt with. And the time jumps near the end just make this worse. In fact they make the whole thing very unbelievable. In the future I'd try and keep the time line more compact, because even with true love a relationship will die within a month of not speaking. And even if it wouldn't in real life, it seems unbelieveable when it's read.
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  • From ANON - Rich on April 29, 2005
    Wow, I don't think I've seen something more set up for a sequel since the last X-Men movie :)



    Seriously, that was great and, I think it would be fair to say, epic. I think that the only thing that limits the reviews you get is people don't have time (or the inclination) to read such long stories, but you make it worthwhile. It felt like you were losing your way once or twice, but it always came back together, and at least you had the decency not to kill anyone at the end!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 22, 2005
    Still really enjoying this story. I love all the twists and turns,as well as the intense emotions between the characters. I've never been a Faith/Willow fan,but your story has me completely captured. Nice work!
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  • From ANON - allie on April 17, 2005
    nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo that was a good fic
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 13, 2005
    I'm very surprised there aren't more reviews for this story. I suspect that's because not a lot of people are big Willow/Faith fans. I'm not either,but this story has completely captivated me. I absolutely love how you've worked in "real" events with your own story. All the relationships are great,I especially love the friendship between Buffy and Faith. I love how they are so prickly one moment,tender the next. It seems to fit them,and I think all the characterizations have been on the money.This has really been an intriguing story with lots of twists and turns,and I can't wait to see what's next.
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  • From ANON - aberahamtulip on April 05, 2005
    I really like this, but I can't really see any way for you to link the beginning with the the events that have already happened. You say that Faith claims she doesn't love willow and willow believes it, in the first chapter, but the letter faith leaves in this one is hard evidence of one of the several instances that seems to make that impossible. Also at the beginning it seems like the story will be about their finding their ways back into each other's hearts, which I've gotta say really intruiged me. Now it looks like you've lost that thread, and have just embarked on a new one. It's not bad, but I was really looking forward to the original one. Either way you should pick one and stick with it. If necessary revise the first few chapters to eliminate the inconsitinsies. Thanks, look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Rich on April 01, 2005
    This is fantastic stuff, it really is. I've read most of your previous fics and occasionally they've felt a little too much like they're just (very well written) transcripts of the episodes, but this one has a nice balance. I both love and hate the depth of your writing - love it for the quality and strength it brings to the story and characters, hate it sometimes because it can mean it takes ages to read the chapters! :)



    I hope the little warning you insert at the start of chapters about the potential for character death proves unnecessary in this story - even if they are only fictional characters, two people who've gone through such agony deserve to emerge on the other side.



    Anyway, please keep writing - the last thing I want is to see the story left unfinished.
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  • From ANON - anon on March 27, 2005
    never could get into faith/willow - i'm a hopeless fuffy shipper. however, if anyone could get me to read fillow fic it would be you, norwalker. you're a gifted and natural storyteller. there isn't a fic you've written that i haven't always loved. keep up the good work (and use your powers for good and give us some fuffy stuff). ;o)
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