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Reviews for Oncoming Train

By : scyllablue
  • From ANON - Dun DUn on April 06, 2005
    Very Interesting CH. I don't really get Xander though. I know Riley is his friend, but he seems to be more interested in him than that. But he's with Spike. Damn you! Your driving me nuts. PLEASE Update SOON.
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  • From ANON - krimson on April 04, 2005
    You did that just to make us all write and demand more immediately didn't you? The previous chapter left me feeling very sad for Riley. I mean, the sex was scorching hot, but it felt like a kind of slow suicide, like he was just giving up, surrendering to the path of least resistance. But this chapter felt better, like he was making a choice, not just giving up. And the scene with Xander was very sweet. I really liked the part about Xander's excess love flowing over to fill Riley's hungry heart, which is not so hungry now. Very sweet, not just passion, and not just romantic love, but the love of friendship, which I feel is even stronger than the other kind. More tempered anyway. So, here is your demand--give us more right now!!! :)

    BTW, when you said "Xander's love and desire for him near palatable", did you mean "palpable"? Palatable is kind of funny in context, but I didn't think it was what you meant.
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  • From ANON - DunDun on April 02, 2005
    WoW its getting better. Keep it up. Im wondering are you turning this into a A/R/X/S fic? Sounds great =).
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  • From ANON - CC on April 02, 2005
    Just wanted to say I'm still here and still enjoying it muchly. Very interesting, can't wait to see where it goes. And instinct, hmm.... Let's see, a testosterone laden ex-Commando - whatever could his instinct lead him to do? Can't begin to imagine.
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  • From ANON - TheShadowCat on April 01, 2005
    More to cum, hmm? Please hurry.
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  • From ANON - Alice on March 30, 2005
    Yay for hot guy on guy action *coughs*. Very nice. I'm going to go cool my brains down and funnel them back in- they melted out of my head. But I liked the reactions that everyone had, and I liked the use of gaelic. I did sound nice. *bounces happily*
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  • From ANON - Alice on March 28, 2005
    Oh, yeah, I forgot. I promised you a jig, so here ya go. *does a spiffy jig*
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  • From ANON - Alice on March 28, 2005
    Its so sweet how careful Angel is with Riley. The plot is sucking me in, and I eagerly await more.
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  • From ANON - krimson on March 26, 2005
    Indeed a fine close to the week. If being the center for someone else is what Riley needs to find his own center, he's in good shape. Tough way to lose the scars, though, and an interesting approach and symbolism for Angel, the cross a sort of redemption for past sins.
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  • From ANON - DunDUn on March 26, 2005
    You know what? Best Riley/Angel fic there will ever be... Can't wait till the next part, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Alice on March 25, 2005
    *grumbles* well, that was good, and the whole claiming thing was intriguing. But I wanted more kissing... yay for men kissing men. Good work, keep going. I'll do a jig when you post next, promise.
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  • From TheShadowCat on March 25, 2005
    Good job. More please.
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  • From ANON - Krimson on March 24, 2005
    Another chapter and a good one, what a nice way to wrap up my work day. I really liked Riley's fire here, so many authors who take the delicious hurt/comfort approach make Riley entirely too pathetic. I like this Riley that isn't going to back down just because Angel gives him a bit of a shove. I can definitely see that being a big turn on for Angel, too. A prize hard won is always sweeter than one easily taken.
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  • From ANON - Alice on March 24, 2005
    Ack! What, you cut if off there! I need more! MORE! But whats up with the initiative, lets get some info, and lovin' in the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - CC on March 22, 2005
    Hey, you're welcome! I'm really enjoying this and looking forward to more and more and...well you get the idea.
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