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Reviews for Please Don't

By : Tenebra
  • From Squiddosaur on March 21, 2011
    I had to review this great story.

    It's Andrew going along with Warren's desire to play like he's raping Andrew. Yet at first it reads like it really is rape. You did an excellent job with that. All the subtle hints, even. And the story reads even better the second time.

    I'll admit I read this for Andrew, because I love him. But this was totally a story about Warren, and it's intriguing. He wants the sense of total control in a situation more than he wants Andrew to want it.

    I love all of Warren's dialogue. It seems completely in-character. It has a little cynicism in it that Andrew never really picks up on (or likes to think isn't there). And the things Warren says make Andrew seem even cuter (to me; in a way).

    My absolute favorite is the very last line of the story--for its ambiguity that I adore.
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