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Reviews for Who Knew There Were Two?

By : LuvinJMSpike
  • From ANON - Maria on March 22, 2005
    Eh, I don't really go for the incest or 3some thing, but this is pretty good. So...uh...update soon. Also, I tried e-mailing you, but it didn't let me. Will you e-mail me, please?
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  • From ANON - Taylor on February 08, 2005
    It's... better.

    Kudos.
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  • From ANON - Velondra on January 24, 2005
    i like your story, but spike seems a little to well ajusted
    just thought id tell ya
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  • From ANON - Cristcat on December 27, 2004

    I love it, jenn...Please continue soon. If I can say somethig, you can't listen the bad commentaries about your fics because they are so wrong. You are amazing!
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  • From ANON - Taylor on December 27, 2004
    Hmm... hadn't seen you for awhile. Had hoped you'd taken me seriously.

    Still sucks. Suggestion: You don't have to put in *every single minute detail* of their everyday lives. No one really cares about arguments with Giles that have nothing to do with anything or... actually, I skipped most of it, just because it had no real meaning into the story.

    And stop putting in things to display your "vast knowlegde of the verse" (and I use sarcastic quotes). It's not canon. Don't try to make it so.

    It's not that I don't like it. I like everything besides the way you're writing it. So you can either ignore this and continue to annoy almost the entire Spangel community, or you could try to take some ConCrit (which I realize wasn't in the last review, and I guess I apologize for that much), try to fix things, and get someone with half a brain who you don't know in real life (and won't be afraid to hurt your feelings) to beta for you.
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  • From ANON - Taylor on December 15, 2004
    Please, stop? There's not really a nice way to put this, so...

    Your writing style kinda sucks. It's painful to go through, and the only reason I'm bothering is becuase you're showing up on every list and group I'm part of and I'm about ready to scream.

    Nothing personal, just... stop?
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  • From ANON - Melissa on December 14, 2004
    Hey Jenn. Great story so far! Kinda long but thats ok! Cant wait to read Ch. 2.. you're working on it right now as we speak on the fone! So this is a daily conversation between me and Jenn when i read her fanfiction... "awww! poor spike! angels sucha bastard! i cant believe he did that!!" "umm Jenn.. you wrote ite.." "yes but its so sad!" lmao
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