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Reviews for Captured

By : kleysa
  • From SpikesSlayer08 on December 02, 2010
    Wow i'm dying to know what happens next please continue
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  • From ANON - pony on July 17, 2006
    Amazing! You should keep on it!
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  • From ANON - FicFiend on January 31, 2006
    Oh I loved this!! I really, really, really hope that you continue soon!!! I'm looking forward to some more hot and heavy scenes between Warren and Buffy :P I love this idea and I think you're a great writer as well and this fic is too good not to continue, leaving it alone would be a real shame! Hope you write more soon!!!
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  • From ANON - CD on December 19, 2005
    Aww, c'mon Ayla, how many reviewers have to beg you to continue? This story's awesome! I like how Warren keeps focusing Buffy's attention back on her body. Nevermind that he is dangerous and has no right to touch her, once she is thinking about whether or not it's enjoyable, she's reacting to him. Buffy's embarrassment and panic just add to the intensity of her sensations. The fact that he keeps talking to her, taunting her, and expecting answers keeps her from finding a quiet place in her head and shutting him out. Very nicely done.

    I haven't seen much Slayer, but I wouldn't think sex is generally very fulfilling for her, unless it contains a certain struggle for dominance and the threat of deadly peril. After saving the world a few times, I just don't think going all the way is the same big deal it is for most teenage girls. Unless, of course, she's sleeping with the Big Bad. Or whatever. As invincible and confident as Buffy is, I don't think anything could have gotten her attention as thoroughly as being forced did.

    Owning up, though, I also really enjoyed that this was Buffy/WARREN, of all people. Considering how much she and the gang despised the troika, it makes sense that she underestimated their abilities. I can't wait to see what you do with Andrew. Heh, after all those times she called him a virgin ... so ironic. Everyone knows Warren's dangerous, but it's going to rankle to be just as vulnerable around his young sidekick. Try explaining that to the rest of the Scoobies.

    Please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Lala on November 27, 2005
    Please Continue and add Anderw and Jonothan.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 27, 2005
    You have to write more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 25, 2005
    write more
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  • From ANON - Tasha on August 05, 2005
    Loved the story. It was great. I hope you'll make a sequel. You rock!!! Keep up the good work.
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  • From kurumi on April 30, 2005
    Wow, that was gross, Warren, ewww. I so much rather see Buffy with Spike or Angel. I like this fic though, even though Warren was in it(I'm not a big fan of him) If you write more, I will read it.
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  • From ANON - ashley on March 28, 2005
    please make some more and please add spike!!! love the story it's awesome but make buffy have more control and be more helpless!
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  • From ANON - becky on March 28, 2005
    oh please keep goin that was uber hot!
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  • From ANON - urname on March 21, 2005
    I know NOTHING about Buffy so i say that they should rape her until she die or some thing well good story owner of AFF
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  • From ANON - Ella on February 28, 2005
    this story would be sooo good if spike rescued her at the end!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 28, 2005
    "She felt a traitorous burning flush rise in her skin as he viscously rode her." You can't viscously ride someone. I have to admit this made me laugh. Perhaps you should reconsider your wording.
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  • From Jeanster on January 15, 2005
    I love this story! Please update soon.
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