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By : DarkRhiannon
  • From ANON - chelle on October 10, 2003
    Please keep going. i want to see what happens. will the spell only work for those who are soulmates, so that they have to be together. Keep going i need more!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kristi on September 30, 2003
    Wonderful story! I can't wait for the other chapters!
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  • From ANON - Queedicedicea on August 12, 2003
    Dear DR: When are you going to finish this story? I need my vicarious B/A smoochies!
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  • From ANON - Jen on July 02, 2003
    okay so great stroy but there is no way in hell u can keep Buffy blind. And if Willow is eyeseyes basically wont that mean that Buffy still can't see well i mean she cant see in front of her she can see what willow is seeing? i think the spell should go wrong and Buffy gets HER sight back but there's a side effect she can now see wat all of the scoobies (excluding angel because wont work on vamps) can see whenever she wants which could enable u to make one of the scoobies get kidnapped and she discovers that gift. something like that i dunno if it is corny but think bout it!
    --GREAT STORY
    --Jen
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  • From ANON - Laura C on June 01, 2003
    I've been reading this story on Starrkitty's site and am engrossed in it. It's believeable. It's pure Buffy/Angel. and I want more
    soon. PLEEAAASSSSEEE! Thanks. Laura C
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  • From ANON - Inara on May 16, 2003
    It?s a great and wonderful story, please continue soon
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  • From ANON - QueenBoadicea on May 14, 2003
    Ch. 7 Well, I don't see Connor being quite this emotional or sentimental but I'll take it over the dreck of AtS season four.
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  • From ANON - dragonqueen05 on May 14, 2003
    Beautiful. I have a feeling that the spell isn't going to go so well. You wrote the LA part amazingly well. You caught the emotions and wrote them like very few have been able to. And that includes Joss and Co. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Kinderbrause on May 08, 2003
    Please update soon!! I'm addicted to your stories and waiting desperately for a new chapter!
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  • From ANON - Dlgood on April 24, 2003
    A great chapter. I find it very believable that Buffy would seek to bury her turmoil by focusing on her slaying and duty. Her insistence on training (which she used to always try to get out of when she had a life) kind of reminds me of her maniacal approach towards the Thanksgiving dinner. I also liked the way she echoed the "morning after" scene with Angelus when she was trying to push him away. Not exactly "Wishverse Buffy" but, IMHO, certainly in character.

    Hope to see you continue this. Perhaps you could find a reason to send Buffy back to LA - there's no immediate reason that you'd have to - especially as long as she's so focused on re-learning Sunnydale - but it'd like to see it.

    Also - I do like the way Buffy's discovery that she can still fight gives her purpose while at the same time also reminding her of her underlying issues. Good job maintaining the angst even when you gave Buffy and Angel a curse-free love scene.
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  • From ANON - QueenBoadicea on April 24, 2003
    Hey DR, I didn't tell you how much I loved the little internal dialogue going through Willow's, Giles' and Xander's heads on the various nudity they had to witness: Willow ogling Buffy's nipples, Giles stupefied at Angel's...proportions and Xander once again noting what a gorgeouy Auy Angel is. Yowzah! Funny stuff.:D I'm looking forward to more Scooby naughtiness.
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  • From ANON - Tygerlily on April 24, 2003
    Another fabulous part, I must say. I really like the way Buffy is being stubborn about things, normally ics tcs that would frustrate me but for some reason, I like it. Though sometimes I do wanna try and smack her. Angel seems to be really trying. Oh well I can't wait to see what happens when and if Giles calls. Will Angel come back to Sunny-D????


    Please Update this one again soon!
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  • From ANON - QueenBoadicea on April 23, 2003
    Ch. 6 I am so glad to see the continuation of this story! Angel is being his broody best and Buffy is being typically stubborn. I was hoping for more sympathy from Xander, though. This nastiest towards Angel is something he should have outgrown a long time ago.
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  • From ANON - QueenBoadicea on April 15, 2003
    Ch. 5 This is a wonderfully agst-ridden chapter. You manage to take all the elements--humor, embarrassment, self loathing and really hot sex--and tie them up in one beautiful package. I'm eagerly looking forward to the upcoming chapters.
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  • From ANON - dragonqueen05 on April 14, 2003
    Very good part. I'm loving this fiction. You wrote the emotions in this part *so* well. Please write more soon.
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