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Reviews for The Visitor

By : koomkie
  • From ANON - James King on November 11, 2006
    I really liked this, I thought it was really hot. You did a great job! I haven't read a story with this pairing before but I really ended up liking it. I hope you write more stories so that I and other lucky readers can enjoy more of your brilliant work.
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  • From ANON - Daintress on November 08, 2004
    That was - quick but not painless, I guess. How does a gay man seduce a heterosexual? I guess I just don't get it. Maybe it's a girl thing, but no matter how attractive I find other women (and there are some real beauties that I work out with), I just don't think there's anything any of them could do to get me into bed. You're either wired that way or you're not, right? I guess there are two schools of thought on that. It's back to the age old question: Is it a choice or is it pre-determined genetically somehow within each person? I don't know the answer to that, and I probably never will.

    Your story brings up some heavy questions, even aside from the obvious use of another person's body just to "scratch an itch," though I've been told a million times that women just can't understand that part, and I should give up trying. Still, it seems like there ought to have been some sort of emotion involved. Other than lust, of course. Listening to his thoughts as he contemplates the seduction, he seems very cold to me. Very removed from the situation. I don't think I'd be flattered by his attention, knowing what I know of him thus far. But then, as I told you in a previous e-mail, I have no history on these characters to suppliment my knowledge of them.

    All in all, it's well written (I wouldn't expect any less) and entertaining. Keep up the good work! If you post another story, though, be sure to spend some time on what your characters are thinking and feeling for those of us who haven't met them before!

    ~Brandy
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