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Reviews for Betray

By : Prophecy
  • From ANON - Lorenzo Soledad on June 21, 2008
    I loved this! One great fic and I really hope you write more of it!
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  • From ANON - Nitogumi on July 06, 2004
    Hell yeah! Gackt-san rocks! To Feel the Fire is one of his best songs...great story too loved it!
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  • From ANON - Doug on June 27, 2004
    Its like you're at an Air-show and some plane just had something go wrong. You're watching all the Barrel-Rolls, the Twistee-Tooos.... smoke all across the sky..... and there's not even a bang or fire and smoke... That one bird you've been eyeing high above going straight and level, it just rolls to the side... but there's no power behind it. The nose drops a little and keeps rolling; a flat-spin from 1500 feet. Looks like the pilot trys for SOME control, but its fleeting... And you see the flash of light from the impact, and maybe your body feels that sound as it passes through you...but that which is `you` doesn't. The image is burned into our eyes. Thats all that matters; what we felt when we saw all our dreams and fantasies....crash.
    Right, like I should talk. But we know it when we see it. Train-wrecks. Thats what eveyone likens' them to. And that fits, but planes...and dreams... They just go together.
    This is a very good (and very sad) bit of one-shot. As such, we can all just let our minds wander and fill in the what and when, Canon-wise. Same for what was, and what we could always have hoped for these girls. And there are so many good stories that are out there that give us those good feelings. There are a few that some authors have sed bed but never went back to, some that, yes, it needs a little more. Why? Well, read a couple here and there out on the Web that have just 1, okay or maybe 2, chapters, and tell me you're not still screaming at the monitor "Give Me MORE!!!" 2 or 3 years later.
    Could we see Buffy getting off her ass and making a decision? Its been tried.
    We're all Charac. T. This was... I don't know, but I'll hope like everyone else. As is....it just fits. Thank you.


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  • From ANON - Jane Shadow on July 23, 2003
    Wow this fic is awesome... I know it's been here for a while but I just now discovered it... and this is one of the best "pwp" fics I've read in ages. Esp. with the B/F pairing, and a totally original approach/dynamic! Your visuals were great too, a lot of really perfect descriptions. So much I could almost imagine the feeling of Faith's li- uh... erm... maybe I should stop there. But really... REALLY great fic! So many good things to say... hold your head high, you deserve it!
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  • From ANON - ElizabethScripturient on July 05, 2003
    Hmm, when is this meant to be set exactly? What kind of backstory are Buffy and Faith assumed to have? Some flashback scenes in later chapters giving teadeeader more background could be really interesting. The whole thing reads kinda wrong to me, though i think that's because Faith's being angry and coarse and it doesn't exactly make for a nice flowing scene. Though there's also the part where Buffy isn't very willing and Faith practically forces her into sex, and that always disturbs me (for personal reasons), people being pressured into sexual things they don't want to do.
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  • From ANON - faithful_chickie on January 31, 2003
    Very cool fic. I love how Faith fucked her first then told her. lol I could say Faith being jealous and pissed off like this. :) FC
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  • From ANON - Scott on October 15, 2002
    It was pretty good, though I would have liked to see Buffy get what's coming to her. A little payback never hurt anyone. The cheating bitch should burn.
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