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Reviews for Fangless and The Whelp

By : Spacey
  • From ANON - Bemidia on October 22, 2006
    That was so bad it was good. Brillant job!! You've touched on every cliche I've ever read in this fandom, and I love you for it. :) Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - tallis on August 18, 2006
    that was effing hilarious, I totally wasn't expecting it so there was a moment of confusion before it dawned on on me, d'oh ;) the award for postmodernism goes to... and yet it stayed affectionate... bravo my dear, very well done :)
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  • From ANON - Avraya on August 03, 2006
    *falls over and laughs hysterically* That was the single best parody I have ever read. I'm pretty new to reading S/X fanfics, but you hit ever single cliche I have read, except for one with a really weird plot.

    Fantastic work, and a great how-to guide for writers!
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  • From ANON - Weee :D on October 10, 2005
    Wah! I love this! I love satirical amusing fics! Lmao! It was great! Totally fitted in with the 'original' plots. :DD. I wish there were more~. You remind me of this other fic i've read that was like this.. xept it was for x/1999 written loooong ago. And that one cracked me up. :D Please write more pleaaase. Do moreeeeee. :sigh: that was great

    ~
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  • From ANON - inthesilence on August 27, 2005
    That made me giggle. XD
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  • From ANON - AfraidtoPie on July 30, 2005
    That was TOO funny! Made me feel dumb because I know I've used more than one of those in my own stories. LMAO that was too good.
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  • From ANON - Drake Roberts on July 30, 2005
    Oh, my God! This is friggin' hysterical! I'm afraid my laughter might have woken up the neighbors. The descriptions and pacing of this are fabulous, as well as the how-to manual to S/X intercourse you got going here.

    Okay, I have to go rec this fic to a couple of friends now. Great job on the fic.
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  • From ANON - Susan on July 29, 2005
    Oh... boy.. O_O THAT was an ... education.. Interesting. :)
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  • From ANON - Falcon on July 28, 2005
    *ROTFLMAO* You hit EVERY. SINGLE. CLICHE!! *applauds* Every writer should read this as a guide for what NOT to do in their fanfic *EG*.
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  • From GriffinLillani12 on July 28, 2005
    That was...very strange...but I liked it! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - flit on January 15, 2005
    I have only one, small qualm concerning this story:

    "?That?s alright, Spike,? Xander said, nuzzling the vampire?s neck. ?The drawer by my bed has a never-ending supply of lube..." "

    Most men actually do have a never-ending supply of lube. As in, they don't let themselves run out. Even if they don't use it for sex, they WILL use it to jack off. Personal hygeine fluids (i.e. soap, shampoo, and conditioner) cake dry or make gross bubbles.

    Still, other than that, it was possibly one of the best parodies I've ever read - barring the fact that you forgot to poke fun about how Spike always manages to get around that terrible, migraine-inducing chip to bite Xander, or even just have sex with him - all the lube and stretching in the world won't make it not hurt the first time. So, unless our favorite Rock!Stupid boy first screwed himself on one of Anya's leftover dildos - which there always seem to be - Spike would probably get all "ow". Afterwards, of course, he will be soothed by the tight, wet heat of Xander's 'arsehole' and pound furiously into him, somehow without triggering another headache.

    Gotta love fanfiction.
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  • From AngelofShadows on December 20, 2004
    This is such a funny story. :)
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  • From ANON - Godiva on September 08, 2004
    OMG! Lovely little collection of cliches you got there, pet. I spent the whole time chortling, and almost snorted soda outta my nose once. Thank you for making fun of all the stereotypes cluttering up the ether. Keep writing and ng fng fun! Ta!
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  • From DeadFerret on April 13, 2004
    A melting-pot of cliches, wonderfully illustrated and brilliant in the way it was carried out. But why doesn't the Lube Fairy leave pressies for me? T_T
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  • From ANON - Amie on March 06, 2004
    This is hilarious....a brilliant parody pointing out not only the stupidity of nearly every slashy fan-fcition but also pointing out alot of the mistakes from the show too. Lol well done.
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