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Reviews for The Witch, The Warrior, and the Vampire

By : spikesbrandi

From on August 25, 2009
first is i dont like slash, most of the time.. but this story is soo good i have to like it...
you made spike in to a person i could like.... and you made xander strong i think that..

i hope xander and buffy have sex lots of sex...and a really good talk they are some time the closest people on that show and some time they are like strangers i hope they talk and get really close....

dont let when people call you sick get to you who cares what they think.. this is a good story...
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From ANON - Myst on May 20, 2004
Brandi - I absolutely love your story thus far! You still have a few errors in syntax and such, but I didn't even notice them on the first read through of your story. Just to let you know how much I have enjoyed this, I have been reading stories on this site since it began and yours is the first story I've ever reviewed! Please give me some more chapters!! I've been waiting so patiently, but now I've read this for the fifth time and I need to know what happens next! Good Luck, and thanks for the story.
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From ANON - soxfan on April 12, 2004
Gotta tell ya, love this story. This is so well done I don't even know where to start. First, I love how you've captured the voices of the characters, while obviously off canon, I can see each character responding in the way you describe in similar circumstances, ie: Xander's horror at his turning and who his sire is; Spike's attempt to be a good sire, while avoiding pissing off the slayer; Buffy's contradictory behavoir (think and feel one thing but act completely opposite to that because that's how she thinks she should be). I feel kinda like Giles, absolutely sucked in and fascinated by the whole vampire customs thing. Nice job with VampXander, haven't read that before and I like the premise. Keep writing, this is good stuff.

Oh, and don't let the knuckleheads get ya down about the M/M stuff. This site is called adultfanfiction, did somebody think we were sitting around here reading the bible? I usually read B/S and don't usually read Spike/Xander but you know what? not only do you make it hot, but it's kinda sweet too. Who knew Xander could be likeable again? One more thing, I like your pacing of the B/S storyline. I'm usually "fluff over angst" anyday, but this is even better-more real -if I can use that term regarding a fictional story, about a fictional world involving demons! Sorry about the babblefest, I don't review much, but I got kinda carried away.
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From ANON - C.B. on February 14, 2004
OH! BTW, your smackdowns of the non/Slashers and Spuffyfuck addicts are nearly as entertaining as the story itself. I was completely LMAO. I get where you're coming from, story wise, with the delayed Spuffysex. Actually appreciate it. Rock on, babe.
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From ANON - C.B. on February 14, 2004
Well, this is just too good and hot not to continue. Please, for the love of all that's good and smutty, and actually plot driven, keep going! Love it.
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From ANON - coiledsoul on February 06, 2004
I've been waiting FOREVER for you to finish this fic and gave up about 6 months ago. Then I stumble upon this website and was shocked and pleased to find that you had picked it up again. I love this story and cannot wait for you to update. I think the thing that I enjoy the most about it was rereading it and seeing your skills as a writer inprove with each chapter. Keep up the good work. The more you write, the better you get.
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From ANON - flameywicca (2lazy2login) on January 27, 2004
Well, B, that sure took you one HELL of a LOOOOONG time, now didn't it? *grins* I forgive you. This chapter was good. It's good to know that once Buffy's admitting that she's confused instead of straight out denying it (either to herself or another). I can't wait til the Buffy/Xander convo. Take as MUCH time as you need with the Spuff, cause I'm definitely enjoying the fic as much without it. More ASAP, kay girl? ~flamey
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From ANON - flameywicca (2lazy2login) on December 23, 2003
Wait a tic, are you talking about me too? Cause you wouldn't be wrong. DAMN, girlie!! That was HOTT!!!!! But its time for Ahn and B to get some now too, huh? *grins* Hmm... *ponders* I wonder who was the one who groaned... *grins wicked* Bet it was Buffy. More soon! ~flamey

PS: Oi, guess what I just noticed? You posted this the day right before my birthday! Great gift to give another girlie, ey? *grins*
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From ANON - nat on December 19, 2003
Oh my god! That was hot! Even though Slash is not my cup of tea, I thought I would continue to read your fic anyway. Hoping for some hot and heavy B/S sex down the track.
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From ANON - ancientgirl on December 18, 2003
Okay first of all I'm really loving this story. Although I don't care much for the Spike/Xander thing you've done an incredible job with it. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for what I really want to read which would be Buffy finally going to Spike.
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From ANON - flameywicca (2lazy2login) on December 12, 2003
Omigoddess, that was... That was.. Words can not DESCRIBE what that was, or at least no words that I know of. But, for lack of a MUCH better word(s), it was bloody wonderful. And it was totally beyond what I thought anyone could do without make it sick and grotesque. Buffy reaction to all of this was completely true to character. I mean, look what happen when Wills told her she was a lesbian. And I am so incredibly happy it was Anya who (literally) knocked some sense into her. *appalause for Ahn* GO demon-girl!!! *smiles* Can't wait til the next chapter, and remember what I said last time about flamers! Seeya ~flamey
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From ANON - snow on December 12, 2003
me again...just wanted to say, i totally agree w/ Pin - Yeah, Tough Anya!!! (i really like your Anya *sigh*) more of her, please?!?!
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From ANON - snow on December 11, 2003
it seems as if i've been waiting for this forever - it has been one of my *favorite* fics and i was heartbroken that there was no closure!! Thank you so much for continuing! A year(ish) ago, this piece was the first slash i had ever read....what can i say, i'm now addicted. As for the concerned spuffy readers - you've taken us this far and it's excellent - i'm sure you have great things in mind! and who can resist a little slash?? Also, i've always been interested in the potential dynamic between vampXander and sireSpike....i am really enjoying your take on this relationship! and your Buffy is spot-on...i can just feel her righteous indignation rolling off the screen! *sigh* i love this. please continue...
snow
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From ANON - Pin on December 11, 2003
Excellent! Really imaginative and very convincinI loI love your Tough Anya and how she forces Buffy to acknowledge a reality the Slayer wants to resist. I really appreciate the strategy of first resolving the relationship between Spike and Xander before you address the more fundamental issues between Spike and Buffy. Spike being allowed to be a vampire in the truest sense is fundamental to any relationship h may have with Buffy. Anya's role of guide is so important in all of this and works so well for resolving the dynamics. Your depiction of Xander's growing understanding of what it means to be a vampire and a Spike's fledge works really well. The sexuality of their relationship is explained and makes sense, at least to me. I think this is still going to be hard for Buffy, but I'm glad that she's been able to actually say what is bothering her. Loved the Anya-Buffy fight! Go Anya! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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From on December 07, 2003
Oh! Me! MEEEEEE!!!!! I wanna watch the hot monkey sex!!!!!!!! *grins* I swear you are phycic, I've been using the term "hot monkey sex" since I was 11. That was FIVE YEARS AGO! *sighs* I suppose I won't sue. Awearwearing I probably could too. I'll tell my frien Ash to review and tell you about the whole "copy write" thing. *grins again* I'm nutters, I know. Pretty damn proud too. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter. I so wanna see Xan and Spike's reaction to their audiance.in tin turns wicked* What fun this will be. Of course, the only reason I'm totally into this is cause I'm a bisexual freak who's just as keen on boys-on-boys as a 12 year-old boy who's found his father's newest issue of Playboy. But then again, we're talking about Spike-on-Xander here, so I'm sure there will be quite a few of mostly female readers who will enjoy the next chapter almost as much as I will. Almost... *sighs* Like I said, nutters. Either you love me, or you hate me. Well, more soon ~flamey

PS: Pay no attention to those homophobic bastards who will probably flame you for the little in this chapter and the whole lot (I hope) in the next. And also, take your time on the major Spuffy-ness, there's no rush. *glares at some of the readers* RIGHT PEOPLE? *hears muttered, angry and/or reluctant responses of confirmation* Right. *winks* Cheers.
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