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Reviews for The Witch, The Warrior, and the Vampire

By : spikesbrandi
  • From ANON - Lisbeth on October 19, 2003
    Lovin' this story so far. The chapters dealing with Xander's turning are the best yet! Xander's emotions are so genuine, just what I'd expect iis sis situation, and Spike is such a sweetie! (But not too sweet:-) The slashiness is yummy, and perfectly understandable in the context of the story. It just makes the Spuffiness to come all the sweeter. It's about time Buffy got a little jealous!
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  • From ANON - Nightmelody on October 15, 2003
    You are telling a fascinating story, and telling it well. It is 'Spuffy' since Spike and Buffy are a couple, and have a mature relationship. I think your story notes are adequate. Your story is complex, not Spuffy pwp (not that there's anything wrong with that!), and you are handling various character plot lines well, blending Angel's story, Spike's and Buffy's and Xander's seamlessly...Keep up the good writing!
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  • From ANON - Cassy on October 15, 2003
    I have to disagree with Iffygal. This is definately a Spuffy fic, in the fact that Spike is madly in love with Buffy, and Buffy loves him as well - she's just only realising it now. Spike may be having sex with Xander, but that's a totally seperate issue. Xander is still in love with Anya, but is but is having sex with Spike. s a s a vampire thing, it doesn't take away from Spike's feelings toward Buffy.

    Now, that said, I have to admit it was the promise of m/m slash that got me to start reading this, but I honestly feel the turmoil that Buffy is in now, and I'm rooting for her and Spike to work things out. Me being a Spander shipper and all, that's quite the accomplishment for you as a writer.

    If it takes another 25 chapters to get Spike and Buffy back into bed, then that's what it takes. It's the journey that matters, sex for the sake of sex is fine but Spike wants love, and I think it'll take time for Buffy to admit to herself that she loves him. Please keep updating the story.
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  • From ANON - Iffygal on October 15, 2003
    Whilst not endorsing Angela's point of view completely, I find that I can't go on reading this story. Yes you'vrnedrned us about mm and ff slash. That doesn't bother me, what bothers me is that I have to wait for 25 chapters to get spuffy. Don't announce a Spuffy fic if it isn't truly one. And for the person out there who said that spuffy put her off and slash turned her on then isn't that a case in point? This is no spuffy fic.
    And so on this.
    Goodbye
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  • From ANON - Nabiki on October 14, 2003
    Hi Brandi, When are you going to finish the story? I love so far what you have wen, en, Is Maggie going to help Angel and Cordy and Connor take care of the people in L A. Have a nice day.
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  • From ANON - NEONEX on October 14, 2003
    Hey. First off I've been reading your fic and I think it is awesome. I just saw the letter you wrote to Angela and let me just say, thats bullshit!
    If she doesn't like the S/X than I suggest she doesn't read it. And there are way worse fics out there. This person doesn't know a good fic if it hit her between the eyes. Sorry just wanted to say that if this person has a problem with your fic, which again is a great fic, no one is forcing them to read it, so how about they remove that stick from their ass and get over it. Please keep updating, I am dying to find out what happens. Keep up the great work.
    NEO
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  • From ANON - Lauren on October 13, 2003
    Hey, I've actually been reading this story for awhile now (I believe you've posted it on a couple of different sights before this) and I just wanted to drop a line about how much I've truly enjoyed your story. For one the take on Xander's transformation is brilliantly composed. You broke it down into both it's physical and mental hemispheres, not giving either undue credit on how he's turning out and didn't make it into a "oh, I want you so badly Spike" or a "please let me stake myself *sob eyes* story. I would watch out on perhaps hitting a rut though...it's really easy to get caught up in getting through the rising action to the thick of it that a lot of authors will stop immediately after the scene that made them want to start writing the story (if that makes any sense). Anyways, great job and keep up the fantastic work.
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  • From ANON - lemonychocolate on October 12, 2003
    Typically I'm not a major Spike/Xander fan, however, this is extremely well done. While slash in itself is good, it really doesn't mean anything (at least to me) if there is NO PLOT!

    You have a plot, a focused love of Spike for Buffy (which I find disturbing, but that's just me so ignor that comment) and it seems, a 'committment' of a sorts from Buffy to Spike.

    You test and strain the bonds of friendship between the group, and are managing to bring them back together again. Your characterization of the Btvs casts are well fleshed out and intriguing.

    I enjoyed the way you had Xander seek Angel's help in order to help both Spike and Buffy. It showed a maturity that sometimes we (meaning other writers) don't give credit to Xander. I finished chapter 14 (I think it was fourteen) and I enjoyed the way you had Xander's demon recognize that Anya the mate.

    As you can probably tell, I like the story! And to those that don't appreciate slash...a plot is a freakin' plot, so just enjoy the story and the ignore slash if you don't like it. Besides, it wasn't exactly slash/slash for the sake of getting two men into bed with each other, it was a necessary part of the storyline/plot.

    That being said, I can hardly wait for your next chapter!

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  • From ANON - Nightmelody on October 06, 2003
    Hi Brandi. I've been enjoying your story and think you've done all the proper warnings etc. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Lady Emma on October 06, 2003
    Love it, love it, love it. Can't wait for more.
    Oh, and Angela is a moron. Pay no attention to her. We all love the slashy-goodness.
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  • From ANON - Brandy on October 05, 2003
    Me again, I kinda answered my own question I guess..lol I see now the story has yet been finished and listed.... I really look forward to reading the rest.. GREAT GREAT STORY!!!

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  • From ANON - Brandy on October 05, 2003
    This is a great story, it ended on page 11, is the rest listed here on the site, yet to be added or was that all of it? Whoever wrote this done an excellent job on it, Spike is my favorite. :)


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  • From ANON - Angela on October 05, 2003
    Please, no Spike/Xander-slash. It really makes me wanna vomit. Please don?t, I really liked your story so far, please don?t fuck it up.
    I?m sure you have enough imagination to solve this other ways.
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  • From ANON - bridget on October 05, 2003
    this is so great. please don't stop.
    thanks
    bridget
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on October 02, 2003
    I'm really loving this fic, please update soon.
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