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Reviews for Through the Eyes of a Child

By : Cath
  • From ANON - NEONEX on September 21, 2003
    Is this the end? I hope not, because I am really enjoying this story. You are doing a great job.
    NEO
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  • From ANON - cathy on September 20, 2003
    This is such a sweet and lovely story. Wonderful. The characters were so well done, too. And Dru....I really like her. Thank you, Cath, for this story. You are really, really good.
    Cathy
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  • From ANON - Susan on September 20, 2003
    I really enjoyed this and I'm glad to see it finished! Very good story!
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  • From ANON - alex on September 06, 2003
    Just read this story and I love it .......sitting here desperately awaiting a conclusion ....please don't leave me hanging ......well written .....well done
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  • From ANON - Susan on August 19, 2003
    I just finished reading the whole story just to come to a cliffhanger??? WHAA! I hope there's more soon! This story just brings the reader right into it and I love Spike's interactions with Xan. I look forward to reading more of this story, hopefully very soon.
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  • From ANON - wren on August 19, 2003
    oh yes this is great!! really really loving this .. and the plot just keeps getting better and better.. question though.. did the gang know that xander and spike were together prior to chapter 9 cause i didn't think they did.. anyway.. i would love a little more back story for how they got together,, but then again i am a big spike xander whore and can really never get enough of them.. lol.. ok now for the obligatory .. more soon please.. Wren..
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  • From ANON - mochav on August 19, 2003
    I really like this story I think Its a very enjoyable read. I hope to read the conclusion soon.
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  • From ANON - Angela on August 18, 2003
    If you don't continue this story at a nicely brisk pace, I will channel my inner Spike. Threats aside, I enjoyed your story immensely. Writing Xander's speech patterns as a six-year old can't be easy and you've done very well, made me think of beautiful little boys that should be treasured. So far I can't see where you've stepped wrong once on your portrayal of any of the characters and I'm pleased you aren't falling into the easy trap of character bashing. The demons you created are believable and I am very interested in where you are taking this story. You've shown yourself equal to the task of portraying adolescent Dawn, Shy Tara and little boy Xander, I can't wait to see how you handle insane Drucilla. Her speak patterns are amongst the most challenging but can be a delightful cackle when done well. Now that I've buttered you up (and not undeservedly) onto demands. What will Xander retain memory-wise when he gets back to normal? Is he going to be cured? How is Drucilla going to react to her 'Dark Kitten's problem? How is Xander going to deal with Auntie Dru? Could someone please have some appropriately violent and justified retribution on Xander's parents? Maybe even Dru for daring to hurt her Dark Kitten? Will there be resolution and revealings of Xander & Spike's relationship? Will it be involved in his cure? Inquiring minds (mine) want to know.

    After all that, as much as I want to find out what happens next, don't let the demands of your fans effect your enjoyment of real life activities. Time away from the computer is healthy, as well as providing inspiration for more stories.
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