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Reviews for Through the Eyes of a Child

By : Cath
  • From KurosakiYumi on December 29, 2009
    This was adorable! I loved it.
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  • From yeagerbomb on September 22, 2009
    this story is so cute. i'm really glad i thought of it and came back to reread. keep writing!!~
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  • From yeagerbomb on April 18, 2009
    aww. this was precious!! i love young!xander. and angel-peaches. i just /knew/ he would work in calling him that one more time. and spike was so cute. great job. wonderful story, it was sweet.~
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  • From Alwaysand on August 16, 2008
    I absolutely loved this whole story. All of it from Spike loving grown up Xander to Spike loving Xander enough to take care of him when he reverts to being 6. I especially liked that Auntie Dru came to the rescue. After having Spike take care of her for 'soddin' forever i was nice that she could do something for him.
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  • From delilahblue64 on April 18, 2007
    I really liked this story - very sweet. I liked the way Spike was so devoted to Xander even though Xander thought he was six. Reading this gave me a warm fuzzy feeling, I just wanted to cuddle the little guy! LOL

    I only have 2 criticisms:
    1. The story is out of order, I didn't notice until I hit Chapter 4 when I should have been reading Chapter 8 - it threw off the flow of the story.
    2. Spike constantly calling Xander "Xan-pet" got on my nerves from the beginning. I thought it was a bit inappropriate especially when he said it around others, since no one was supposed to know about their relationship. Once in a while privately and when Xan first went missing - to me it seems that that would have been more poignant - that's when we would know that he really loved him.
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  • From ANON - karen on February 03, 2006
    I really, really like your Spike and Xander. The depth of caring is just amazing. You might (constructive criticism, here) need a beta reader for basic spelling, grammar, and sentence structure; boring stuff, why should you sweat it? :-). Hopefully leaving you more time to write beautiful stories like this one.
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  • From ANON - Kotay on October 23, 2005
    OMG, this's awsome!!! Loved the way ya portrated Spike, he was juz so sweet an' patient with his Xan-pet.

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  • From ANON - Jaspis on June 19, 2005
    I think six year olds have some sense of identity. How come he doesn't realize he's physically different? Oh well. Loving the story regardless.
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  • From ANON - AzureHart on February 06, 2005
    This story was fantastic!

    I loved the way you showed Spikes tender side, without making him seem weak.

    And the scene with a sugar hyper Xander was too, too funny! I sat and laughed
    untill my ribs ached.

    Great job!

    ~Azure


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  • From ANON - Morrolan on December 06, 2004
    Love this story, but I thought you should know...You have chapter 4 posted in the spot for chapter 8. You go 1-3 skip to 5-8 back to 4 then 9-10.
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  • From ANON - ejji on March 15, 2004
    Wonderfull, absolutly wonderfull story.
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  • From ANON - Chris on October 30, 2003
    This has been a great story. Xander as a 6 yr old was perfect, and it's nice to see a sympathetic treatment of Dru.
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  • From ANON - Purple Mist on October 13, 2003
    My god, this is such a lovely and sweet story. I truly enjoy reading this. Love how alll the characters are in character and like-able. Even Dru. This one is so going under my favorite fics. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Crystal on September 26, 2003
    I think this is the best story that I have ever read. Please continue to write more often. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Thanks
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  • From ANON - Margie on September 23, 2003
    Ooh, I loved this story. Your child Xander was so sweet, I loved all his names for everyone and the way he always put "my" in front of everyone's names. So Xander! I also liked Angel's relationship with Spike and the way they had a father/son type thing instead of the usual we hate each other relationship. Although I'm sad to see child Xan go, I'm happy that Xan and Spike are back together and poor Spike's angst can now be ended. Great job! Is this the end, or will there be more? I hope so, I'd love to see Xan and Spike's relationship as adults...
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