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By : Oric13

From Krulos on June 14, 2021
Chapter 10a.
Also, you have Elizabeth's ex suggesting that Cordelia swear to aid in Buffy's corruption by a contract... but the following also is my humble request: that it be continued, especially if it involves Kendra aiding in rescuing Buffy from her seeming addiction to Cordelia's body.
I eagerly await the 11th chapter of "Buffy's Bitch", a work of yours that is really well-done and has a lot of good quality observations, including the touch of Drusilla being a witch, and I also liked how she was disgusted by what Angelus's ex-girlfriend Elizabeth and his ex-girlfriend's girlfriend, Cordelia, were up to... wow were they naughty!
Hopefully you'll continue writing, and if you've got a mind-block, I'm willing to help you to troubleshoot the mindblock you could be dealing with.
Sincerely one of your hopefully entirely too many fans;
Krulos.

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From ninesenshi on January 10, 2021
Great story. Hope to read more

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From Krulos on March 14, 2019
General Review as of Chapter 10a: As usual, Sir, I want MORE of this. I especially like the idea of Buffy going mostly by her nickname and her real name being Elizabeth, and am particuarly fond of the part where she's nursing on her submissive girlfriend, Cordelia Chase, in Miss Chase's bed... can't wait to see how Cordelia's parents react to *that* relationship, though, as that'll be DRAMA for sure!
I await more of this, and happen to know that, barring something horrible having happened in your life, more is on the way, based on our email conversations in letter format previous to this.
I sincerely beg and beseech you to post more of this when and as soon as you're able, Sir.
Sincerely one of your hopefully entirely too many fans;
"Krulos".
P.S. I'm especially fond of how Spike told Angel "And your girlfriend's girlfriend" during their watching of those girls misbehaving so tremendously in the back yard of the Chase Mansion. And how Elizabeth tends to bolt away from her duties to hang out with her new love interest, if indeed it *is* love, and not lust, as their friends fear it might be; potential for Miss Young to attempt to rescue the incapacited Miss Summers from her "Cordy addiction" should be interesting, based on our email discussions.

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From Turranas on September 14, 2016
I'm guessing it's basically abandoned after ~10 years which is a real shame, this was an awesome concept and well written story.

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From ANON - Douglas on May 11, 2015
Good GODS, but I need to rub one out! AGAIN!!!! Actually, I was rereading (yes, REreading) this over on Cordyslash as of oh 3 days ago before coming to those dreaded words... " To Be Continued... " after it ends at `Or rather his evil counterpart: Angelus.`
It shows 'here' on AFF it was published 5 Aug 2003 and with the last update in Jun 2006. It gives a date but not a year on http://www.dymphna.net/cordyslash/ . Here's the thing; I `think` I first read this way back on a site that Was called `Buffysmut.com (or something, maybe Other than a .com?) back in like 2000 or 2001, though!!!!
But A and Dru? , and anything that might have happened to Queen C?... no clue.. til I read 10a!!!!
Very long story short, please PLEASE pick up the stake (opps, pen) and toss us a little more
Very Pretty PLEASE!!!!!
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From Krulos on May 13, 2014
Chapter 9.
After a perverse and rather frightening dream from Buffy's head, involving some perversions out there online today, that could be rather laughably referred to as 'ultimate surrender sunnydale', Buffy practically decides to forcibly date Cordy!- WEIRD!!!!!
Cordelia shouldn't be ashaimed, Buffy is the one who's been misbehaving!
What I did enjoy is the scene where Cordelia is telling Giles what's been happening: that Should have happened long before in the story, Miss Summers crossed the line!
The forcible dating idea I do find somewhat funny!- just also extremely disturbing, and must never be done in real life.
Buffy being possessed could explain this story, and would explain the story's oddness.
Weird works, Sir! I would very much like to know how this will end.
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From Krulos on March 07, 2014
Buffy has really misbehaved here: she's been raping Cordelia! If she got truly creative, she would have carefully disabled the security system so that Cordelia was imprisoned in her own house, while Miss Summers could get in and intimately abuse her any time she liked! In short, she would have turned on the system full blast and (electrical system, that is), and then, broken the security box so that Cordelai is effectively imprisoned in her own house, and yard! No escape from her mistress for her! None whatsoever!
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From Krulos on December 13, 2013
Well, I get the angst, but where's the jealosy? I see why Buffy would be jealous of Cordelia, but why Cordelia of Buffy?
Cordy may annoy Buffy to no end, and from the books, Buffy does like Cordelia as a friend, but I just don't see Buffy trying to do this to Cordelia... interesting solution; demon slime that causes lust!- That'll do it!
Later on it turns out that Buffy seems to totally enjoy kissing Cordelia! I really don't blame Cordelia for telling on Buffy, she needed to!- Buffy has seemed to see Cordelia as her personal sex slave! SICK BUFFY!
NO WONDER Cordelia called Harmony and remarked that they had doubled 'little miss psycho's' medication! She's sure acting like a psycho: breaks into another girl's house and violates her in her own home, then forcibly sleeps with her! Buffy needs help!
I like it!
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From Krulos on December 09, 2013
The best thing I can say about this is that Buffy seems to totally enjoy kissing Cordelia- she's doing that almost every chapter!
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From Krulos on December 09, 2013
I enjoy the 'helping some poor girl with tremendous emotional problems' scene (Cordelia's line to her date)... of course, Buffy is acting like she's got TREMENDOUS Psycho-Emotional Problems! She's been RAPING Cordelia throughout most of the story!
I do enjoy the scene where Buffy is hiding out in Cordy's closet, and Cordelia isn't more surprised by the fact that Buffy's in her closet!
Interestingly perverse story!
Cordelia will likely be very upset and scared now that she'll find herself waking up next to her rapist- Buffy! I have heard that when a woman commits rape she often does so with a bed involved.
This is really perverse!- EVIL BUFFY!
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From ANON - MarshallOC9 on December 19, 2012
REALLY nice story so far i hope you keep it up. It is certainly one of the most entertaining stories i've read on this site.
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From ANON - Ms Ice on August 25, 2012
This story has been my constant 'I hope..' stories. Ya know the one that you seek after a while and check up in hope that the talented author that got ya hooked on their story has finally decided to update. *sighs* yeah, that would be this one. and YOU would be that author! *looks at you pleadingly* please please update! that or at least send me a pm and vaguely outline how this story ends. Years!!! thats how long ive been hoping....i love your other stories! im a major F/B shipper but this one has that special difference! hope ya update. Happy writing :)
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From ANON - Anon on March 17, 2011
I hadn't even noticed you updating this story a long time ago. Well, I've finally caught up and enjoyed every word of it. It's a pity you haven't been writing for a while now. I always liked your stories, no matter which Fanverse they've been set in.

Fun writing, well executed. Please continue this story at some point!

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From ANON - RainAddict on March 28, 2010
holy shit i love this story! so hot! i hope one day you decide to add more to it cause its beyond hot and just wow! if you ever do update it i would really appreciate it if you notify me and tell me so i can come read it.
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From ANON - Shalee on January 12, 2009
I have to applaud your efforts. I really love this story. I have seen nothing like it in all my time of reading BTVS fanfiction. I am begging you on my knees to please, please, please update. You left me hanging high and dry wondering what's gonna happen with the story and if the relationship between Buffy and Cordy will actually develop on both their parts.
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