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Reviews for ONE NORMAL LIFE / TWO EXTRAORDINARY LIVES

By : fairviewim
  • From ANON - Emma on June 19, 2004
    Never have I cried so much readig a fanfiction, I've been keeping up to date reading your latest chapters and I have offically fallen in love with this story. I can't wait to find out what Buffy says in answer to his question.
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  • From ANON - sluggie on June 18, 2004
    I haven't even read the update yet but I had to thank you for it! Yay! I've been waiting and it's finally here! Will review more after I read it..hehe :-)
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  • From ANON - Petra on May 21, 2004
    WOW! I've read 149 chapters! I'm impressed, with my and and with you! 'cause you were the one that wrote it! And it's great!
    I don't think it's too long ( it's too short, write more ;D)
    It's like a novel, a brilliant novel... ;)
    I hope you'll continue to update this( it would seem kind of silly to stop now, just so you know)so I can continue to be amazed by your work!
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  • From spikesbint on May 13, 2004
    I have now read up to chapter 139, I think I will save chpt 140 for tommorrowI reI really liked the part where William discovered the secret stairs and the attic with all the paintings in it. I just like the whole story, it gets better and better!

    SB
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  • From spikesbint on May 12, 2004
    I have caught up to chapter 135 now and all I can say really is wow, they were wonderful chapters! The evil goings on at W&H and all the stuff with Dru, & Nathan Rayner, I can just tell there is some heartbreak to come soon :) Am I right? Guess I will just have to keep reading to find out!

    SB
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  • From ANON - Caroline on May 09, 2004
    Brilliant work . Reading this was intense and aching ; your writing is tight , your dialogues so thoughtful and brisk , and some lines were so poignant , that I would have liked to find the right words to comfort them .
    As much as I can imagine the dramatic waking-up that is Buffy's confession about his past - he being the sweetest of men , and discovering something so dreadful , so out of reacreach for his mind - I had some difficulties to understand why he was so angry with her ( even if I know that his confusion and his distress have to be directed toward someone ) , her who is obviously suffering deeply..
    Of course she lied , she lived on lies for one year , but what d had have she done , whereas she was so happy to find him again , to welcome him as a man.. It was a very difficult task to tell the truth. And now it's a real nightmare.
    I felt so sharply Buffy's pain and confusion , when William yelled at her if the life they shared was her idea of happiness , bc it wasn't his... I think my heart broke.
    For it isn't her responsability if he was a monster for 120 years ! To realize the horror of what he has been , what he has lived for , must be incomprehensible , but he need to see that she's in the same torment.
    The picture of them , crying , lonely , in their little house , was so , so sad..
    For now I keep in mind that William has not Spike's memories : memories of blood , but also memories of passion , burning devotion , for the love os lis life , for the woman who's standing right in front of him.

    Oh William , when will you accept her loving aura , again ?
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  • From ANON - Karen on May 07, 2004
    Oh wow fabulous chapters. I'm sitting here bawling like a baby lol Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Caroline on April 29, 2004
    Threeelleellent chapters ; and the end of the last part broke my heart . The wait for the big conversation is killing me ..William's silence defines so deep hain ain and his torment , but his last line " It is all a bleedin' nightmare " gave me shivers. Their connection is so broken .. How could he accept his awful past , and how Buffy could explain their life before ?

    Hanging on the edge of my seat - again - , and I implore you to give me more as soon as possible.
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  • From ANON - Caroline on April 16, 2004
    These chapters were heart-wrenching , and written with so much emotion ; the anguish and pain felt by William seemed to be unbearable , and I felt so sharply Buffy's dread , and her loneliness - wit with the warm presence of Dawn and John. They will needa lot of time to heal..Something has been broken between us ..the feeling of betrayal is strong in William , though he shouldn't be so hard with Buffy ; it was the most tearing and sad thing to imagine them , together in this bedroom where they had blissful moments , wounded , lost , side by side yet so lonely.. But I keep hope , with Dawn : they will get past this , together.
    Thank you for this.
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  • From ANON - Caroline on April 16, 2004
    These chapters were so heart-wrenching..The anguish , the pain , felts by William were thoroughtly described ; and I felt sharply Buffy's dre
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  • From ANON - robyn on April 13, 2004
    this is an reallllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy awesome fic and i love it soooo much! please update soon I wanna find out what his reaction is! ro!
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  • From ANON - Rachel on April 11, 2004
    OK, the form didn't get completely sent the first time. Anyway, that was me after reading the newest chapters to ONL - love it, love it, LOVE IT! Great chapters, I love the angst throughout it all, great writing of William's reaction and injuries (OUCH!) and Dawn hugging him at the end. I can't even begin to tell you how much I'm lookiowaroward to reading the next few chapters, espeically when their conversation comes up. :)
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  • From ANON - Rachel on April 11, 2004
    Squeeel!
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  • From ANON - spikes bint on April 05, 2004
    glad you have given us such a big update, I loved chapter 130, where he spent the last of his pay cheque on the dress for her. Interesting reaction to the dress, can't wait to find out what that's all about.

    SB
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  • From ANON - Caroline on April 05, 2004
    (Chap-130-140) Thank you , thank you so much for these awesome chapters. I love deeply the way you 're portraying their lovely life , and you captured their happiness in plenty of wonderful moments : when William is drawing his beloved Elizabeth , when they fall asleep in the arms of each other , when he seems to always know what she's thinking, when they are making love , of course..
    She's his anchor to this reali and and it's heart-wrenching to think how much he needs her ...as much as her nerves are screaming for him.. Absolutely beautiful . Reading about their life is entrancing , and I will never have enough !
    All this part was perfectly built , a great mixture of tension , peace , joy , and fear. The last chapter was incredible , fabulous in its pace , until the final scene in which I was with William , overwhelmed with terror ; Drucilla's voice was really well done , and whereas William's world was shattering , with the awful words she was whispering endlessly , I was thinking : Buffy will come for him..
    But now William will have to face the horror of what he heard...his poor heart feeling an excruciating pain , how will he accept all the changes ? Buffy will need to have strenght , more than ever . And Angel , the bastard , has to suffer a lot.
    A fantastic , stunning , splendid work !
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