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Reviews for ONE NORMAL LIFE / TWO EXTRAORDINARY LIVES

By : fairviewim
  • From ANON - Suzanne on November 16, 2003
    HOLY CRAP! I DONT THINK THIS COUET AET ANY BETTER!
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  • From ANON - spikegirl on November 15, 2003
    I agree with Youngmei. I would be dissapointed if you suddenly ended the story with a quick resolution. If you did that then the whole build up of detail would be for nothing. What you are writing is a novel, not a short story.
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  • From ANON - youngmei on November 15, 2003
    Take your time! I'm really enjoying reading this. Actually I would be quite disappointed that after all of this build up you gave William back his memories and ta da! It's done. I think that would be quite a let down. It's like reading a novel, you have created the setting, characterization, and it is building to the climax.
    I also like how I have to wait a short time between reading each new installment. Usually I just rush through books devouring them whole but this is allowing me to really enjoy myself.

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  • From ANON - youngmei on November 13, 2003
    Sorry to hear that you've been experiencing writer's block. I just wanted to let you know that you have kept me captivated and I think that your slow introduction of pieces of Spike's memory is really great. I agree with the reviewer before me that it is inevitable that William is going to find out about Spike's past. Really they are far too comfortable right now. Also I'm wondering will William finding out about Spike's past bring back his memory or will he simply learn about it and have to deal without really remembering who and what he is? Is Angel going to be brought in to the story and maybe jumpstart William's memories? Hmmm... so many questions but I can wait for the answers (not too long though...)
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  • From ANON - Angi on November 12, 2003
    A hundret chapters! Yay spikealicious! No, honestly I just want to let you know that you still amaze me, you?re still holding my atten and and
    having me follow your updates like a puppy-dog, because I simply love this story. I?m looking forward to you handling the next BIG rock on
    the way. It seems inevitable that he?s gonna find out eventually and I?m strangely sorry that it has to happen. What?s it going to do to
    to William? Choices, choices. I can?t wait to see which way you go. Please lead the way further soon. Thanks so far for all your wonderful
    work!!!
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  • From ANON - Nazzy on November 11, 2003
    I know this is going to sound bitchy, and I want to say that I really love this story, but, are you ever going to finish this. I'm finding myself wanting to read a conclusion. Is he ever going to get his memory back? Is Buffy ever goto tto tell him the truth? What's the deal with Angel? And what's the big secret Willow's coven wouldn't ler ter tell Buffy?
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  • From ANON - suzanne on November 05, 2003
    My bad...chap 95...DMV....ok now read my previous comment
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  • From ANON - suzanne on November 05, 2003
    Chap 94 was part of the story, you needed it for some normalcy.....so it was fine to keep it in!
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  • From ANON - babe on November 01, 2003
    can't remember if i already reviewed or not.if not, i shoulde 'e 'cos i love this story. i am probably one of your older readers, so i loved the dmv parts, as i had dealings with them when i took my son to get his provisioal license(learners permit). we were not even allowed in the building, as we were half an hour early!!we had to go and walk around the shops until we were let onto their hallowed ground five minutes before the test (well i say *we*, he was sent for his test, i was sent outside again) luckily he pasand and we won't have to go there again!
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  • From ANON - uncouth kitten on October 31, 2003
    Still loving this just as much as the first chapter of the first story, truely appreciate all of the work and effort that is put in to make this so good.
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  • From ANON - vicann on October 27, 2003
    Well I've just spent the whole of my day off reading this story, and the one before, which at 11:19pm I can't remember the name of (One normal day?) Sorry.
    You have had my heart in my mouth and tears in my eyes. I am so happy I have found these two stories. This is the way it should have been. I am now eagerly awaiting your updates. Such a great story. (You even made me come to some peace with Xander, I dreaded reading anything about him, but you managed him really well).

    Soooo good. Please keep it coming.
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  • From ANON - spikegirl on October 26, 2003
    I'm really enjoying your fic! I can't believe that it is 92 chapters. I think I could read another 92!
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  • From ANON - youngmei on October 22, 2003
    Thanks for the spoilers, it makes me anticipate the chapters even more. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. I'm becoming a devoted fan!!!
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  • From ANON - spikes_chick on October 20, 2003
    I LOVE this fanfiction, im really looking forward to seeing how you make william remember and find out about spike. You've done a brilliant job so far i love it!!!well done

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  • From ANON - youngmei on October 18, 2003
    I just can't express how much I am enjoying this story. It is so well written. I never thought that I would like William but the more I read your writing the more I find him endearing! However, I agree with Spikegirl, I like the way you are slowly giving William glimpses into Spike's memory. This is the part of your story that I find the most interesting. I keep checking to see if a new chapter has been posted because I am really anticipating how William is going to react to Spike's memories.
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