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Reviews for Coming Clean

By : Roberta
  • From ANON - jen on October 16, 2005
    ooh even hotter th?n the first part. you describe spike's appearance perfectely
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  • From ANON - baby_goofy1999 on July 23, 2005
    OMG!! I almost cried during that one chapter. You sure know how to make a person think the worst huh? Heh. Like so many good books I've read, I skimmed ahead to see what would happen. Not whole chapters, just the one I was reading. Enjoyed reading so much.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on May 14, 2005
    Fabulous Spuffy story! Great angst, WAFF and smut! I'll be dreaming about the pool scene for a long, long time. Thank you for sharing.
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  • From ANON - June on August 11, 2003
    I looove it. I read it first at SpuffyFantasy.com (great side, if you don't know it check it out at http://www.spuffyfantasy.com/) and now I foud a lot more stories here.
    I hope to read more of your wonderful fictions. You are one of the best writers out there. :)
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  • From ANON - Jen on July 26, 2003
    Loved the Dr's Note. Very funny. Great story - maybe we'll get another sequel?!?! I'd love to hear about the wedding.
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  • From ANON - angie on July 25, 2003
    just had to say I really enjoyed it.....thanks!
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  • From ANON - Cin on July 25, 2003
    YEA! congratulations on a wonderful story. i must say i am disappointed that it is finished. i really enjoyed reading this story. a great AU story that is in the Buffyverse. i look forward to other stories you might be writing. bravo!
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  • From ANON - Thia on July 22, 2003
    I just read Ch 9 and 10... I'm crying really hard. This is a shock! wow! You have to write more soon, please? I'm so loving this story! This is one great spuffy story!! Keep up the wonderful work!!
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  • From ANON - Vonnie on July 21, 2003
    AAAHHHH!!!! So cruel you are! But it makes for good plot so i am no longer angry!
    Love the story, and I can't wait to see what happens.

    Vonnie
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  • From ANON - virginiajm on July 15, 2003
    I have to agree with the previous poster about Buffy's immaturity level and her complete overreaction to not being asked to her prom. Get over it Buffy! I really enjoy this story, don't get me wrong, but I find Buffy's extreme selfishness and stubborness to see anyone elses' point of view but her own a total turnoff. If William ever needed proof that Buffy is not emotionally ready for a mature relationship that little episode gave it to him in spades. She might be "18" but she acts 13.
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  • From ANON - Renee on July 15, 2003
    I thought Buffy came off pretty bratty in the prom chapters. Why would she assume that William would ask her to her prom? He doesn't go to that school. If she wanted to go, she should have asked him. She didn't even care what reasons he would have to be against it. It was all about her "perfect" night that she was dreaming about for years. A sign of immaturity.
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  • From ANON - Jen on July 06, 2003
    That was just too funny. I loved the way you had both Giles & Joyce find out. I was laughing hysterically with Joyce's come on and later embarassment. Too funny.
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  • From ANON - Lisa Lee Gear on July 01, 2003
    KOOL story! i love it! i can't wait to find out what happens when Joyce and Giles find out! plz update soon!
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  • From ANON - Tammy on June 27, 2003
    Hey, I can't wait until the other part is done so i can read it... Other then that it is wounderfuul... well bye
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  • From ANON - Jen on June 21, 2003
    I'm so glad you decided to continue Room Service - that was a fantastic story. This one is shaping up to be fantastic too! Very hot.
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