Reviews for The Cookie MonsterBy : LL72 |
Chapter 3: Another excellent chapter. Especially the mother/daughter sex show made for a very hot read.
Good work.
I loved it, you really know how to write a good story.
Great to see another chapter of this.
Once again, very good work.
Although Ted calling Buffy a "dumb whore" seemed out of character for him.
Looking forward to chapter 3.
Glad to see a new chapter. As dirty as ever. Was hoping Ted & Snyder were going to get blowjobs from Buffy at the same time. Or Ted finishing on the Summer's womens faces. Oh well, maybe next time?
Any chance they'll bring in any other problem makers? Like Willow, Cordy? Hell, even Xander could be helpful as another stick to swing at Buffy. Update soon.
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Dirty. I liked it. Its nice to know we can see new things with the Buffyverse.
I'm always kind of embarrassed when writing sex scenes. How do you do it? xD
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