Reviews for The Cookie MonsterBy : LL72 |
I'm loving the progression of this story. One of the few stories that's given Snyder some depth... and girth. Will we find out more about the spell on Willow? As far as interesting girlfriends for Xander in no particular order:
Cordelia Chase (Kind of a standard, but with good reason)
Marcie Ross (depends on timeline, could be fun as an invisible girlfriend and an asset to the Mayor)
Harmony Kendall (everyone needs a good hate bang)
Lishanne (recovered awfully fast from having her mouth sealed shut in "The Witch" perhaps an oral fixation developed?)
Verucca (does it still count as doggie-style?)
Amy Madison (got to keep those witches occupied)
I'd love to see Xander have a romp with Willow at some stage. Thanks for the wonderful story!
Any thoughts on adding more scoobies? Cordy as another girl, maybe? Or dozing Xander to add a third, maybe have a gang bang for Buffy.
Ah, the other girls are starting to join in. Excellent.
This really was a great chapter Buffy / Willow was really hot and the part in which Buffy helps Willow to lose her anal virginity was very good.
Chapter 6: happy to see a Buffy/Willow chapter appear. Principle Snyder is right: "That's hot!"
Nice update! Wasn't expecting Willow to come in. The whole scooby gang will be leaderless now without Giles, will that mean they'll all be going over to Buffy's house? That should open some doors.
Saw the Dawn name drop.
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Another great chapter . Looks like Snyder's got another lady friend . Hope he keeps Willow for himself . Would love to see Willow 'fall' for Snyder like buffy has and buffy get jelous .
Would love to see Cordelia or faith may be also join his little harem lol
Anyway please update soon and keep up the good work
Merlin
Love this story, hope you continue it. While i liked the last chapter, does it sound weird i want another very Snyder/Buffy centric chapter again next. Something about the pairing just works haha
Buffy finally got DP'd by Snyder & Step Dad, while Joyce filmed it. Disturbing and hot. Can't wait to read more, always a pleasure. Sorry to hear about Giles.
Still think Buffy should invite some friends over for cookies.
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Chapter 5: Joyce proudly filming her daughter's first DP made for a truly heartwarming scene. ;)
Also, poor Giles!
Needs more . Snyder and buffy shouldn't work but it does lol .
Wow.
Ever thought about Dracula/Buffy/Faith/Kendra?
Chapter 4: Good to see more of this. Yet another wondefully depraved chapter.
As always, a pleasure to see an update. The orgy was a nice touch, and the Summers trading dicks to blow was spot on. Dirty and fun. Still hoping Buffy will get to double fist both Snyder & Ted at the same time while they finish on her face.
And Joyce of course should get some double action as well.
Curious if any of the scoobies will be coming over to hang out, eat some cookies, see where the night takes them.
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Great update! Always fun to see just how dirty things can get in the Summers home. Wasn't expecting the mother/daughter show for Ted. Sorta wished Ted had finished in Buffy's mouth though, or at least Joyce had shared.
Any chance of Ted/Buffy in the near future? Or how about her friends coming to visit? They loved the cookies on the show, I don't see why they wouldn't get roped into this.
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