Reviews for The Cookie MonsterBy : LL72 |
I liked your new chapter I can't wait to find out your plans for Dawn I hope it involves her mother and sister it's always hot to see a girl being trained in sex by her female relatives at especially when there teaching her to focus on the pleasure she's giving the man instead of her own desires.
Wonderfully depraved story. Maybe it could use some conflict. Perhaps a wish granted by Anyanka to Cordelia that results in a Wesley dominated group using Cordelia, Faith Harmony and Dawn. Some interesting rivalry could develop. Please keep writing.
Goofy with a piggy nose? She was a 16 year old actress. Who lets be frank, grew into her looks. Adding Dawn so soon could be interesting, not sure if you really needed the age up. Curious to see where you go from here.
Buffy/Joyce is always fun.
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Very curious where you'll go from here. There are just so many female characters to use, and with the number of males now either under the cookie or using it, there could even be full on gangbang of a character.
Buffy & Joyce have been DP'd, it'd be a fun bit if say Snyder, Ted, Xander, and even the Mayor all dog piled on Willow or one of the others. Jut my two cents.
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Love the story and love your writing. Only thing i can say is the last few chapters havent been my favs but thats purely because i hate Xander and never want him to win lol The writing was still amazing and loved the little Willow segment. Looking forward to more
man i love this story. It's so hot. I'd love to see Tara get some of Ted's cookies. I know the story is set in early seasons, but still, it'd be hot.
Kinda a mixed bag. Willow blowing a stranger while Buffy did her make up was in line with the dirty, and outlandish plot you've had going. Very much ejoyed it. But Xander & Jenny? Its hard to care about that one.
Being his teacher just doesn't have the same filthy aspect as Buffy, Willow, and Joyce with Snyder & Ted. Now, if it were Dawn I'd understand. But it seemed like a miss.
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Chapter 8: Good idea to bring Jenny Calender into things. She's a bit underrated IMO as she doesn't star in a lot of BtVS smut.
Anyhow, this was another fun chapter.
Incredible as always, I don't suppose we can see the scene where the Mayer fucked Jenny's virgin ass?
Loved this chapter. Jenny is a great match. Pairing her up with Xander is also has nice parallels to Snyder and Buffy. I'd love to see a classroom scene with Xander, Jenny and Willow eventually. Thanks for the update. Now I'm going to go watch the section of Bewitched, Bothered, and Bewildered with Xander and Ms. Calendar.
Need an update! Still think with so many guys now, Buffy could have a real gag bang. Or Willow for that matter. Xander will need a girlfriend. As you taking requests? Cordy is always fun. Harmony too.
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In need of an update! Do we get to vote on who Xander's new girlfriend will be? Is there a list?
I look forward to Cordeilia dragging Anya into things when we she wishes "I wish we got the same amount of cock as buffy summers" and the overeager Anya grants the wish before she realizes the implications. Also Faith welcomed in to the summers household, and dawn popping in out of nowhere ready for a "Sister" sandwich
Xander/Joyce, nice, with a DP including Ted. Very dirty. Can't wait to read more. Westley is showing up soon? So Kendra can't be that far behind. I wonder who will be Xander's girlfriend, and who will get the DP with Ted & him. Kendra? Cordy?
With three guys now in the mix, one of the girls could get a total gangbang. Update soon. Always a pleasure.
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Chapter 7: Fun chapter. The Xander/Joyce pairing makes for a nice change of pace.
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