Reviews for Faith WonBy : justheretoread |
Wow, great story, you really know how to write a hot story.
I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed reading this.
I dunno how I feel about the last chapter. I mean, its demeaning and thats apparently the point of this fic. Of which I don't mind. But was it really demeaning enough? I mean, Dawn is in a picture booth sucking cock and geting pics taken.
Tara was the club toilet for a while. Faith and Anya sodomized Xander. I knew something dog related was going to follow with Buffy and all her barks & collar.
But in all honesty I was expecting Faith to chain her to a pole and have actual dogs take turns on her. Maybe my minds just darker. At any rate, curious to see what happens next.
Chapter 13: Some delightfully depraved Faith/Buffy smut.
Glad to see you're still working on this story.
Yes, I'm still interested in this. And I'm thoroughly enjoying the tale. Even more so when the one being dominated is Buffy. Or Cordelia. Or Fred. Or.....OK any major character. I admit it the show did it right in casting. Please do continue as inspired. No need for extremes, just continue the good work.
Still interested and stsill going strong. I was guessing something like this might happen from the title. Interesting to be proven right. ;-)
Well, Vi seems to have been well-trained already, or quite resigned. And well filled and fucked.
Wonder how Rona will fit into all this. Pletny of potential in all the Potentials. Nice plot development and also hot.
Chapter 11: The Potentials make for an interesting plot development. Also, Faith and Kennedy having their wicked way with Vi was pretty damn hot. ;)
Interesting new development - I like how you're moving this story along.
Chapter 10: some actual plot development! Interesting. :)
Lol. I did ask for more Xander in this story. Wasn't expecting a spitroast between Faith & Anya. Pretty entertaining never the less. And having his nut sent out for Buffy. This is a rather dark and amusing fic.
The Watchers are planning to flat line girls till they have a simi army of Slayers? Well, amoral, but not exactly a bad idea. Can't wait to read more. See where you go from here. Amanda, is the PTS from s7 right?
Glad to see an update. Buffy getting owned by Faith is entertaining enough. Curious what you have planned for the others. Both Xander & Giles have 'evil' personalities locked away, maybe you could do a spell and let them out to play?
Add insult to injury and have them use Buffy, or Dawny, or any of the other girls waiting to be rescued.
Nice, I didn't think you could personalize something as dirty as the Dawn picture show, but Tara the toliet was a stroak of brilliance. Can't wait to read more. Curious if we'll see Xander or Oz out of their box.
Chapter 6: short but sweet. Nice lil bit of smut.
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