Reviews for Faith WonBy : justheretoread |
Nice - excellent start and hot. Hopefully more spanking to come and some Buffy/Willow, and maybe some Buffy/Joyce, Faith/Joyce as well?
Thanks
Nice start. The characterisation seems good so far, especially with Faith. Really loved that Buffy was literally Faith's bitch, having to wear a collar and bark, and I really hope there is more of that. The sex was hot, although I kind of wish it was a little longer. Definitely hoping for more of this fic. A nice hard spanking would be good to see, although I especially love see some strap-on action. Ideally of the anal variety.
Good start. You're doing a fine job on the dialogue--it sounds all nicely in-character.
Looking forward to read more of this.
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