Reviews for Hurt MeBy : FrederickWertham |
Wow! Such a great start to a story! I really love this dynamic - a clearly dominant, but not abusive, Xander, with a very personally submissive Buffy (who is still the boss bitca in a fight).
I really hope you come back to this story. It really is a gem that deserves to be written and read.
Maxtaf
Still waiting for an update!
Very much in need of an update! Need more BDSM Buffy/Xander, and fun with Willow.
Very much in need of an update.
I've really enjoyed this story so far and can't wait for more. I would also like to say just how much I was relieved that they didn't enter into their relationship as if they had been involved in BDSM for years. I wouldn't mind seeing something about research and or seeking advice from someone who has had experience.
Thanks for the hard work
Very much in need of an update.
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Very enjoyable story so far, and I like that it's from Buffy's POV. After the train wreck of the last couple of seasons, it's easy to forget just how likeable Buffy was the first couple of seasons. I also like that you set this early enough to avoid the whole Angelus mess, and I'm really looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here.
Do you know if there is a way to put the story on alert so I get notified when there is an update?
Red
Very cool story love how your having Buffy push some of this but I do hope we get to see how other things are effected like Halloween and how it will change things. I'm also hoping Faith isn't just a quick thing to become another baddy given how shitty she was treated by the Watchers
I know you said none of the Older Cast but part of me wants Dru in on this seeing as she has that obsession with Xander and it'd be interesting change if Dru became a good guy instead of Spike and they helped her seeing as Dru's story is so damn tragic with Angelus torturing her into madness before turning her.
Update soon! Need to know what happens next.
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Very happy to see a new chapter. Not as much smut here, but informative never the less. Sometimes, even in smut fics, we need chapters purely to push forward the plot. Thats often forgotten, and you're left with a lot of smut with a story that doesn't actually make any sense.
But so far so good. Love Buffy & Xander pointing out Angel's bullshit atitude.
Very interested in Buffy's want to share Xander with other girls. Also her curious behavior at the idea of being pregnant so early in a relationship & life. Maybe not too early, but some dirty talk on the subject could be itneresting.
Or Buffy's interest on seeing Xander use Willow, in every which way.
Update soon. Can't wait to read more.
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Here I am wondering what Dru's smiling about.
Also, you reminded me of a "Familiar of Zero" story. Can't remember the title for the life of me but Louise and Saito realize one day how fucked up their relationship is, what with her wipping him all the time. But instead of breaking it off or seeking help, they realize they're a sadist and masochist respectively and decide they're alright with that.
Good start. Although I did notice a bit of a tone change during this chapter; Xander at the start of this chapter seems quite a bit more domineering than he is at the end of the chapter. Anyhow, curious to see where you're going with this.
Great story, psyched for the next chapter.
Thank you for a decent Hetero Buffy fic, that's not Necrophilia based. Make no mistake I liked A&S as characters but romantically was creepy to me. I am a big fan of Xan stories, so I was pretty happy to see this. Thank you and keep up the work please.
See you're going for the hat trick with Slayers. Any chance of older women like Joyce or Jenny?
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