Reviews for Xander & Dawn: To Feel AliveBy : DevilDuck |
Excellent. Read the previous chapters when I 1st joined the site a couple of months ago and good to see an update. Very entertaining story and nicely ironic to see Dawn, the innocent younger daughter being so adult in both meanings of the word.
I wonder if Blue will be staying around and if so how much interaction he will have with the group. Going to be awkward explaining him to any visitors. ;)
Very entertaining, both the sex sessions and the way Xander struggles to handle a sex-craxed Dawn getting them both into more and more extreme encounters, even when she doesn't intend to. This last chapter is very tender and makes a good counterpoint to the previous ones.
Need an update. Still don't know why Faith wasn't invited at least once. The double Xander on Dawn was fun, could have done a 5 Xander gangbang on her too though.
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God I love this story. You come up with some great pairings. I particularly liked Kennedy/Xander and the demon with Faith/Dawn (though I was gutted you cut away from the good stuff with Dawn!). This story is so hot and you make the characters totally believable. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Just noticed there is in fact no Xander/Faith sex in this story. How is that possible? Lets have the happen soon? Or at least give Faith a strap on to use on Dawn. Ohh, a Xander/Dawn/Faith sandwich.
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...Not sure how I feel about the rape scene of Faith.
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Not as fun as earlier chapters. Where are you going with this? Hope to read more soon, see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
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