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Reviews for The Queen Bitch Of Sunnydale

By : ToughLove
  • From Oric13 on August 31, 2010
    Part 19 - Chick with a Dick: Heh. Now this is something new.
    I'm usually not that into the whole dickgirl genre, but Cordy sure makes for a sexy dickgirl.
    And picturing her fucking Faith with her big dick makes for some hot visuals.
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  • From Oric13 on July 18, 2010
    Chapter 18 - A Summers Christmas Party: Damn, those old bitches really put Faith thru the wringer!
    There's something strangely exciting about those sadistic hags having their wicked way with a gorgeous sexy teen like Faith.
    Good ending with the various whippings on the busty brunette's tender charms and her degrading masturbation exhibition.

    Yet another well-written arousing chapter - well done, Tom.
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  • From ANON - Ashwinder on June 24, 2010
    Ohhh!!!! Nice chapter, it always brightens my day to see another chapter for this story. Faith & Giles maybe??? (I'm a massive fan of that pairing)
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  • From Oric13 on May 24, 2010
    Chapter 17 - Two Naughty Nurses: Even though the whole "naughty nurses" scenario is probably one of the most used sexual roleplaying games (alongside "naughty catholic schoolgirl") you managed to write an entertaining take on it.

    I sometimes feel like you kinda rush thru a scene or a chapter, but that definitely wasn't the case here as the naughty nurses performed plenty of kinky exams with their sexy patient (and it also seemed well-edited, which is also a big plus).

    Good job, Tom.
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  • From alienyouthct on May 23, 2010
    Honestly, by now it's gotten a little boring. I don't understand your obsession on graphic strap-on scenes and very limited male involvement but never large scale male involvement; it's a theme prevalent across your body of works. Which... well, is interchangable. There's nothing that really differentiates between this and the last Faith-bashing fic you did. Hell, if I was the owner here, I could probably swap chapters between the two without people noticing.
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  • From Oric13 on May 05, 2010
    Don't get me wrong 'cause the sex was pretty hot in this chapter, but what happened to the roleplaying idea we discussed?
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  • From Oric13 on April 22, 2010
    Wow, that's quite a transformation Tara made in such a short time. Looks like Faith is really good at giving a gal confidence :)
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  • From ANON - HisMrs on April 21, 2010
    Oh wow.... I love this! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From Oric13 on April 10, 2010
    Excellent striptease scene!
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  • From Oric13 on March 31, 2010
    Nicely done!
    I really like how Faith has gradually developed a huge crush on Principal Snyder, of all people, considering that under normal circumstances she'd spurn that little troll. I guess she really enjoys having his big dick in her otherwise mostly clam diet ;)
    The scene where Joyce and Snyder fuck Faith together was pretty damn hot.
    And naturally, I really enjoyed Buffy & Willow class assignment - very well done. Although it would've been even better if they'd made Faith do other (kinkier) stuff besides fucking herself with a vibrator in front of the class. I'd also would've liked to read a few more details about Faith's photo-shoots & movies for the website.

    Overall a good solid chapter, though it definitely could've used a thorough beta-reading before posting as I spotted several glaring grammar errors (some of which caused lines of dialogue to make no sense).
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  • From Oric13 on March 20, 2010
    Hot punishment/fuck session with Snyder, and I sure like the way he send her home :)
    Faith's first "live" performance for her new website was pretty good, although I do feel that for her very first show her owners should've come up with something more special. Especially Willow is more imaginative than this. Also, $10,- seems pretty damn cheap to watch the once sassy Slayer being turned into masochistic totally degraded fuck-toy, but perhaps her owners feel that since Faith is nothing but a cheap slut this should be reflected in her membership fees ;)
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  • From Oric13 on March 04, 2010
    I hadn't been in a fanfic-y mood for about a month, so it's been a while since I checked out this series.
    And today I saw there were three new chapters for me to read!
    Very nice.

    My favourite of the three was definitely part 3 of School Days with the enormous amount of public humiliation Faith had to endure.
    Part 2 of School Days was nice, but simple F/f, D/s at this point just won't do it anymore for me, especially since this series is already chockful of that.
    Buffy Off The Leash was a whole lot tamer than I expected from you, especially since you had made Buffy behave a bit too sadistic for my taste previously.
    It was a pretty good chapter, but frankly after having her crawl around naked at Sunnydale High and running naked thru most of Sunnydale, that little photoshoot, which as a much earlier chapter would've worked really well, felt kinda anti-climactic at this point.

    Still, overall a good job.


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  • From Oric13 on February 02, 2010
    Food fucking isn't really my kinda kink, and letting one "sub" dominate another sub doesn't really work so well IMO.
    Still an enjoyable chapter, but nowhere near as good as the previous one.
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  • From Oric13 on January 25, 2010
    Buffy's such a bitch to her bitch ;)
    Awesome chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2010
    I'm enjoying this story, thank you.
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