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Reviews for Decisions, decisions

By : DanielleFair
  • From Krulos on September 19, 2024

    Chapter #3 review:

    Well, I'm wondering if Faith's going to be kind of upset about Willow being the recipient of a tricked-into-marriage between the two teenage women; kind of well "miffed off" really; seeing as they were only informed that very day and almost hour by her "Pa" "Oh, yeah, and you're getting married today to another teenage girl from your class." kind of a raw deal overall.

    Course, Faith's basically the town's evil princess; but still: being coerced or manipulated into a very overtly fake marriage is humiliating to all participants.

    It's a very high-quality story idea overall; but this's going to cause a strange type of Stockholm Syndrome between the two teen women in this apparently forcible marriage.


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  • From Krulos on September 11, 2024

    Chapter #3 review:

    Yeah, this's the type of *fake wedding* that such a social class as here Faith's kind of recast as the town's evil princess- the type of misbehavior is exactly the type that would go on: here it is the ultimate in fake marriages: a forced marriage!

    I mean: as story material it is pretty good concept, but also highly criminal to basically blackmail *anybody at all* into a wedding.

    Faith here is acting up exactly like the villain in a melodrama, well "villainess" of a particular type at that- go figure; but it will NOT be a happy family given that forced and thus fake "marriage" to put it mildly!


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  • From ajrex35 on February 17, 2012
    Ok this story stayed long time without update. You are not going to abandon it,Right?
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  • From jayjaysi on May 05, 2009
    omg i had to join to write this lol anyways im loving this story seriously so good although i have no problem with the people personalities i agree with the previous comment, perhaps if u put more Detail and slowed down the pace of the story it could be better received by others also i think it would clear up a lot of what your story is actually trying to convey :) and please write more :)
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  • From alyssa01 on May 04, 2009
    First of all I would like to say that I really like this story. The premise is really interesting and has a lot of potential.

    However everything just seems to be moving a little to fast. Also the characters are a little out of character sometimes, like, while the interactions between Willow and Buffy and Willow and Faith are very believable, the Mayor calling off the ascension, Cordelia being the only one with a problem trading Willow and Giles locking himself in his office to get drunk during a crisis are a little out there. It would be good if you could find some way for the Mayor to still go ahead with the ascension becouse there is no way he would have give that up no matter what.

    But while there where also quite a few distracting spelling and grammatical mistakes the story in general is great. I especially like the mating spell and the suprise penis, hee. That spell has a lot of potential to make this story even more interesting and you have already shown your ability to utilise that so bravo.

    Can't wait for more.
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