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Reviews for Poison

By : Akashavampyr
  • From Catchfire on April 26, 2009
    This was a very beautiful piece of writing and I would love to see you continue with this plot line. Just the idea of a dangerous hunter falling unwillingly head over heels for our dangerously sexy but oh so gentle vampire. I think you have what it takes to draw them together. And it would take time to draw them together. But since the give and play between them is so sexually powerful they should be in bed (or an alley) together from the first page on. No matter what you do keep writing. I can tell that (even from such a short piece) that you have a real talent for writing. Normally I'm not on adultfanfiction.net anymore. I got tired of finding all these great stories and were never updated again. So my piece of advice is is to finish the story. You can still post it here and get reviews to help you finish it out. But in order to get lots of reviews you need to have a finished piece of work that's been spell checked and beta read. By the way this piece looked just like that. But for longer fics I recommend a beta or even two or more betas that way you can pick and choose what works and what doesn't. Then when your done post it here of course because this is a great site. You don't have to post all of it at once a little at a time is fine. That's a great way to reel in reader's. We love when a fic is finished but only a little is released at a time. That way you stay at the top of the posting list and will then be seen by more readers and then get more reviews. The more reviews more likely your are to be rec'd by someone. You can also find some good Spike sites out there where people go to find good finished fiction and try to get them to post your work. If it's anything as good as this piece they'll post it. And voila you start getting a reputation for good fanfics. If you then provide more fics, well we'll all love you to death. But whatever you do. Please I'm begging you don't leave a fic unfinished if it's published. Especially when you have at least one reader. It drives me absolutely batty. (Although my dog and cat do seem to enjoy chasing the bats.) There's nothing worse than an unfinished story. I'd rather have a badly written ending than no ending at all. Besides once you get the ending done most likely you'll end up going back and fixing it all up. Artists are never done with their work. But if you decide to go in months after it's finished a completely change a part of it you might want to leave the original version up and do a rewrite (even for only one chapter). Because we readers get really annoyed when you take away our beloved story and change it. What we prefer is that you leave the original up and then post the second as the same story rewritten that way we can have both to cherish. I'll give one piece of valuable advice I've found about writing. When you get stuck just keep writing. It doesn't matter if it's a piece of crap or not just keep on typing kind of like I'm doing write now. Ecept I sure hope you don't have to try and see through a cat. Mine has decided that in front of the monitor is a good place to demand attention. It's a good thing my keyboard is wireless or I wouldn't be able to drive you nuts with a long review that's already gotten off topic. I really shouldn't be allowed to read fanfiction late at night. I have too much of a tendency to ramble on and on and on and on and on. I probably shouldn't have learned how to type so fast either. But it's just so much fun to sit here and watch my fingers fly across the keyboard. I'll say good night now. Good Night. And go on to read more fics out there. Oh by the way for every review you get there's like another dozen or more of us who haven't reviewed.
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