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Reviews for Pleasurable Evils

By : JayDee
  • From ANON - Kayla on May 21, 2022

    Holy Moly this story was a ride.

    I've never read anything like this before and I'll admit it captivated me.


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  • From julpups on February 12, 2016
    Hey! I promised you to leave some reviews and I thought I started with your second Buffy story. As I mentioned I've already read this story a few month ago and had to stop when Willow was magically gang-raped, mutilated, beheaded, torn apart and eaten. And on top of that, her soul is damned forever in the grasp of the First Evil. Fred's and Dawn's ordeals were already quite strong stuff but "Enough is enough! I can't take it any more." was for me at that stage since she's my favorite BtVS character and kind of a soft spot. I was admittedly mentally not prepared and careless. Don't get me wrong, it's not meant as criticism on you. I DID read the warnings but read the story anyway out of twisted curiosity. ("Nah, this can't be THAT bad. Is he trying to scare me off or what? I show him...")

    Afterwards I had to watch "Chosen" again to make sure they're all alright. Which speaks for you, by the way. The same content in a "bad" story wouldn't have had affected me so much.

    However, one thing I've learned is to never take the warning tags lightly again, ever.

    For the second read, I've disabled the part in my brain which is repulsed by the content. Worked quite well. I'd like to emphasize your great skill in your creativity of the tortures/deaths/rapes. It takes a strong imagination to come up with stuff like this and I'm really looking forward how you'll convert it in your current project. The cruelty of the First, Angelus and Spike or demons in general isn't out of place of the fandom as well. It wasn't just displayed in the show, however, it was implied (i.e. nailing kitties on the wall or ripping the groom's arm off and beat him to death with it). So basically are Angelus and soulless Spike capable of such acts.

    Your characterization in general, despite your statement that that's your weakness, in the quieter moments are very decent as well as the typical Buffy atmosphere.

    You're a great author but I never want to read something like this again! :P

    Since this story is several years old, I can assume that your skills are even better now as they were then. Makes me really excited for the coming story of yours. Kudos!

    By the way, what were the parameters of the challenge? Do you remember them? Just killing off the Scoobies in the most disturbing and gory way imaginable, or was there more?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2010
    Good stuff JD. I always liked Willow's character until about the mid-point of season 3, when she started getting all up herself and trying to be cool, and then I hated her fucking guts frankly, especially when she was ragging on Faith. So it was good to read that scene in chapter three of your story where she and Kennedy get cut up and roasted - cause Kennedy was a bitch as well. Overall, great work! Good to see the bad guys coming out on top for once!
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  • From mclay20 on September 24, 2008
    A really good story. Usually your stories vary, but this one is really well-written. I can totally see Angelus and William the Bloody doing this to a powerless Buffy. And some of the death scenes made me laugh... was I supposed to laugh at Fred and Kennedy's deaths? I really didn't like Iyari Limon's character in the show, so maybe that's why.

    You should do a follow-up with Faith, Cordy, Connor, Giles and Anya exacting terrible vengeance on the two -- maybe Giles sodomizing Spike and Faith raping Angelus with a strap-on.
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