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  • From animism on August 10, 2008
    Hhmmm, nice family stuff and then right at the end you had to sneak in the bad guy. Great update I can't wait for more.
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  • From Alonlyvoice on August 09, 2008
    its great that buffy and lonnie are doing great again. what ever happend to the tatoo that buffy got? great job and keep it up please.
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  • From animism on August 09, 2008
    Very hot. Nice to see things getting better for Lonnie and Buffy. Interesting dynamics between Kennedy and Sasha, I like it.... It is a real pleasure to read your stories. Thanks for all the effort and hard work you put into them!
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  • From animism on August 09, 2008
    Ok, I just got to catch up on this story, fabulous updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From animism on August 06, 2008
    Great updates. I am excited to see where this story will end up and yet I don't want it to end. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Alonlyvoice on August 05, 2008
    it be kinda coolish if they went back after everything was done but had a way to come back at any time they wanted so that way they could have the best of both worlds. great job keep it up.
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  • From Alonlyvoice on August 05, 2008
    HOLY HECKMO! is gooooooood! real goooood!
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  • From Alonlyvoice on August 05, 2008
    bumer. i like it a lot. please please PLEASE, update soon.
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  • From Bumkins87 on August 04, 2008
    I knew Ryan was going to be the protector. You put too many minute details into your stories that it was clear that Ryan was the protector... after I re-read the earlier chappies of course. As for Buffy cheating? Yeah, its not her way, she is loyal, however, Lonnie already thinks she cheated so whats the diff? Oh, and don't kill Jaeger, I'd be so sad I'd cry... literally!!!!

    Keep 'em coming!!!

    ~Jen~
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  • From animism on August 04, 2008
    Good chapter. I have to agree that I think Buffy cheating would be wrong, especially with the strain they are both in over their daughter. I was suprised that Lonnie isn't the protector, I think it would have given her a sense of purpose. It is cool that Ryan's blood can kill her father, but more importantly what can the gang do to save Ryan?
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  • From guy on August 04, 2008
    I really hope Buffy doesn't do that because she didn't even let Lonnie take more than one mate when they lived in Lonnie's village even though it's their custom. It's pretty pretty much like cheating and it isn't fair to do that to Lonnie despite everything. Also, Buffy isn't the type to do something like that. She's too loyal. Look at how devoted she was to Angel, even when they were doomed. If anything, maybe Buffy should just find a good friend in Sasha. I really don't think I that I could enjoy this story anymore if Buffy cheats.
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  • From Alonlyvoice on August 04, 2008
    thats really got to suck! but its all good and i can't wait to read more.
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  • From guy on August 03, 2008
    Thanks for the new updates. I hope Buffy and Lonnie work things out. Please update again soon.
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  • From Alonlyvoice on August 03, 2008
    that was funny in a sad way. you did a great job keep it up please and thanks.
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  • From Alonlyvoice on August 02, 2008
    man i hope it all turns out ok. keep the updates flowing please and thanks.
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