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Reviews for Disciplining Dawn

By : MTL
  • From ANON - doug on March 13, 2008
    Hello, and a big 'Hot Dammnn' as way of thanks for this. I thought I'd posted comments earlier when there were only two chps, but finding thats not the case I had to sit and say 'Thank you, Thank you, Thank You!!!' for some scorching reading. For now just write and I'll follow wherever, but as I sit here I'm thinking lets just keep it between the girls with no knowledge ofby the -gang. Thanks again.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 11, 2008
    Very sexy update! Glad you brought out the "meaner" side of Buffy. Of course she still loves her sister, but it's good she made it clear to Dawn that discipline was just that - discipline - and not some erotic, sisterly foreplay. I think this is your best story so far - I really like that you're taking your time to bring more emotional depth to the story.

    Keep it up!

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  • From ANON - v on March 10, 2008
    update again soon!
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  • From topcat098 on March 02, 2008
    This is really good and I'll look forward to the rest.
    If at least one male character is coming into the mix can I hope that he will dissaprove of the relationship between the sisters. Both Summers girls naked and bent over at the same time!!
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  • From Oric13 on February 29, 2008
    Good 2nd chapter. I'm really loving stern & strict Buffy.
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  • From Sepiroth189 on February 29, 2008
    awesome story.. please have Xander involed in this somehow.
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  • From ANON - Fred on February 27, 2008
    HELLOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! WHERE'S THE UPDATES?!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - TK on February 24, 2008
    Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 24, 2008
    Nice...and naughty, lol. I can see why Oric13 likes this story; it's definitely something in his vein of writing.
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  • From ANON - Doug on February 23, 2008
    For now, Tank You! Thank You! Thank You!!!
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  • From Oric13 on February 23, 2008
    Excellent start. I like that you've somehow managed to make the Buffy/Dawn discipline/sex seem in-character for them. You've done a great job explaining the motivation behind their actions.

    I hope that in the following chapters you focus on the good stuff (discipline & kinky sex) instead of going all angsty with a lengthy Buffy guilt-trip. It was the excessive amount of angst that eventually made me lose interest in Donna's Bitch.
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  • From derlich on February 22, 2008
    Can't wait for more. Great writing, but it could use a tad more dialogue.
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