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Reviews for Breaking Faith

By : ToughLove
  • From Krulos on December 22, 2013
    Well, Faith was just gang-raped! Those guards are now worse criminals than she is!- I really don't think those evil cops will stop hurting her.
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  • From ANON - Listener on May 16, 2012
    So... I'll start by saying that I generally enjoyed the story, and the premise -- Willow channeling her darkness into sex instead of violence -- was a good one.

    Unfortunately, I had three main issues with the story:

    1. The sex partners became faceless after a while. By the time W&K started sharing her around, the people fucking Faith had ceased to be differentiated.

    2. Language -- a lot of the word usage and repetition really took me out of the story. Some of it was downright silly.

    3. Redemption. Faith didn't escape (I know, she didn't want to), no one rescued her, and no one took Willow to task in the end. I think I needed that to happen to really enjoy the piece.

    I'd love to see a version of this where the same things happen but somehow the above issues are minimized. I realize this is a sex story through and through, and that's fine, but after a while it just stopped working for me. Perhaps it just got too long.

    Still, good creativity.
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  • From ANON - Dani on March 20, 2009
    wow this story is hot as hell. Wish I was faith...
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  • From ANON - Sandz on September 05, 2008
    Excellent! Didn't see that ending coming!
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  • From alienyouthct on August 10, 2008
    Bring back the giant breasts.
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  • From Merlinius on August 08, 2008
    Fucking right man. Hot and twisted. 8/10
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  • From Merlinius on June 27, 2008
    Hot, but disturbing. Loved more Faith/Andrew. 9/10
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  • From ANON - No one on June 12, 2008
    You'd think with Willow constantly casting spells to make people comfortable with screwing Faith that someone would eventually build up a resistance to it. While it wouldn't be as much fun it would be an interesting change in dynamic for Willow to tell someone to go bang Faith and that person says no.
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  • From Merlinius on June 12, 2008
    Anything with Dawn makes me hard, but Dawn and Faith was double fun. I could've lived with out the weird Kennedy scene. That costs you a perfect chapter.

    8/10
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  • From MTL on June 04, 2008
    I found the spinning wheel thing quite silly but it led to lesbian strap on anal sex which I always enjoy reading so all in all I enjoyed the first half. The second half, not so much. Once again you've used a character I can't stand, Riley Finn, who I'd have rather just been left out of the story. I mean what's the worst Faith ever did to him. Slept with him. Please. Buffy was the one wronged in that situation, not captain charismaless. And I found it very strange having Ethan Rayne being with the military since the last time he was seen on Buffy he was being dragged away by them. But when I ignored which characters were featured in this update I found it was very easy to enjoy, after all the idea of Faith fucking three guys is hot, and it was well written, so keep up the good work.
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  • From Merlinius on May 29, 2008
    9/10. Any chance Connor will show up?
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  • From Merlinius on May 17, 2008
    Pros: under the table with Kennedy, and the bullriding.

    Cons: The Farris Wheel and fratboys. Having Faith ride ontop of the basket was really silly
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  • From MTL on May 14, 2008
    Another well written chapter with some good humiliation. My favourite part was definitely the under the table stuff though.

    For me the idea of Buffy not being attractive is completely alien but to each their own I guess and there are plenty of characters that could kick Willow's ass in my opinion but I guess we'll just have to agree to disagree on that as well.

    Looking forward to your next update.
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  • From Merlinius on May 05, 2008
    I like the cop gimmick, but now I wonder what you gonna do with Kate LOL
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  • From ANON - Mike Martiez on April 30, 2008
    I really like the story. However since you are having Willow let people use Faith for revenge, you have to let Xander have her. Since Faith almost killed Xander, you should have Xander dominate "French Maid Faith".
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