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Reviews for Work in Progress

By : ScarletIbis
  • From MysticAngel77 on April 30, 2007
    Wanted to make sure I left a review :) I've never come across a story with this scenario before and (while disturbing of course) I think it's a GREAT idea. The fact that Spike can't defend himself against a human wasn't really played up enough in the show, I think. To see you explore this idea further is really interesting and I think it would make Buffy's feelings be drastically different.. especially since in canon she was the one who treated him like a thing, her punching bag, her sex toy, etc. I like that you haven't totally painted Riley as a complete bad guy, but he definitely has issues with control / power. It's good to show that he snaps into that rapist mode with certain circumstances, cuz otherwise he would be really out of character. To me, the best stories are the ones that try to stay true to the characters. So far you are doing a very fine job of this and i really cant wait to read more! And thank you for not throwing Buffy and Spike into the sack right away, I think that would be a bit too fast. I'm interested to see how Xander / Willow respond to things, especially since Xander is never really pro-Spike, but what exactly would something like this do to his opinion? Please keep writing! :)
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  • From BuffyFanForeva on March 28, 2007
    Oooohh I so wish he could kick his arse!!
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