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Reviews for Work in Progress

By : ScarletIbis
  • From ANON - Millie on July 26, 2007
    Thank you for your outstanding work, Muse! I'm wondering about Giles' train of thought there and where it's going...:)
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  • From ANON - annieadventure on July 23, 2007
    this is an awesome story...
    love your characterization and your plot interesting and actually challenging!
    keep it up!
    love Annie
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  • From ANON - MysticAngel77 on July 15, 2007
    I'm so glad to see updates! I stopped checking for a while just so that the next time you updated, I'd have more than one chapter to read, hehe. I'm very very glad that Spike got his revenge, even though I think Riley deserves a bit more... but from people he thinks are on his side, ya know? Just my opinion though. The last chapter was handled nicely with Buffy's confusion on the whole "grey area" subject which she's always had difficulty with, but I miss her ferocity and stubborness. I don't think she shouldn't have a change of heart for Spike, I just think she should be more explosive in her reactions, because that's just how she rolls. Otherwise I'm really glad you brought in Xander, since he always adds extra drama and misunderstandings doesn't he? :) I hope to read more soon!
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  • From ANON - mnm on June 27, 2007
    Sorry to hear that you lost a reader. I personally love this story. I began reading it on spuffy realm then found it here when I came to check on another story and just continued it here. anyway babbling. I couldn't agree with you more about Spike not going up to Riley and saying "hey it's ok. You raped me, I forgive you. No hard feelings." That isn't the Spike that we all know and love. I mean look at the grudge and tension between him and Angel that has lasted for a hundred and more years. He still truly hasn't forgiven him, so what makes a reader think that within less then 24 hours he will forgive Riley. If he had did that it would be out of character, and that is one thing with fanfiction that I have a love hate relationship with. Some authors bend the characters to their way of thinking instead of staying true to who they were in the series. And that to me while it can make the story enjoyable... sometimes, it just doesn't grab me the way one that follows the characters emotional growth, and their overall personalities. But it is nice to see what others think. Anyway abbling again. Just wanted to say that I think you have done a great job with this story so far, and I can't wait to see how it continues, especially with Buffy now knowing that Spike feels more then just a love to hate you cause your the slayer feelings for her, and the fact that it was told to her by Harmony.
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  • From ANON - Millie on June 27, 2007
    I like where you've gone with this. Harmony needed some depth! Post more when you can!
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  • From ANON - Sandy on June 26, 2007
    Can't wait to see what Buffy is going to do
    with Spike now.
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  • From ANON - Sandy on June 21, 2007
    Oookay, wasn't expecting that. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Millie on June 21, 2007
    Yay! I mean "Eww". No, yay and eww. Love the biting part.
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  • From ANON - MysticAngel77 on June 05, 2007
    Interesting twist with the chip malfunctioning! I really enjoy the fact that you gave Harmony an actual role that wasn't just a joke. I kind of cringe at how this will affect the Spike / Buffy thing going on with him being able to give Riley exactly what he deserves now - but this is still just the beginning! I'm confident that things will work out, and it's always well worth it through the angsty troubles they get into. Maybe he'll have some sort of guilt about full out killing Riley and not let that happen, just torture, but who knows.. it IS Spike. I'm sure Buffy wont be giddy that he's all with the homicide again, but she should at least be able to recognize that was his right as the victim to at least see Riley come to justice. Anywho, I'm glad you updated and will be around waiting for more! :) Longer chapters, longer longer longer! hehe
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  • From ANON - locked on May 08, 2007
    very different, but I like it so far. :)
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  • From MysticAngel77 on May 04, 2007
    Alright, an update! Sad it was so short, but you hit all the bases and that was nice! I'm hoping to see SOMEONE kicking some ass pretty soon though, but more build up is great and if there's going to be another abuse scene on poor Spike's part, I think it should be interrupted or at least something so that all doubts are erased that he could be lying about the incident. That's up to you though, I'm sure you know where you're headed with your own story, haha. Either way, I will be very happy to read once there's another update! :)
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  • From Cordy4FaithHeaven on May 02, 2007
    hey, nice idea, cool to read. I like how you write Spike, and I like the idea behind this peice. The one think I wonder about is how everyone manages to guess the right thing without every much information to go on at all, and always be right, like Harmoney for instense. Good luke, keep writing.
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  • From phoenix2185 on May 02, 2007
    lol Glad I could help ^^
    Joyce can be kinda scary when she gets mad, isn't she? lol
    I really do hate that chip in Spike's head, making him run from Riley. Of course, he should have known better than leaving Giles' place. And with his luck, he's probably running in the wrong direction, isn't he?
    Well, yet another good chapter, keep up the great work ^^
    Talk atcha later

    -Becky
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  • From ANON - stellalux on May 02, 2007
    very intense. well-written. Keep it up!
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  • From phoenix2185 on May 01, 2007
    Hey,
    I'm usually too lazy to sign in, but since you haven't been getting any reviews, I thought I'd take the time lol.
    I really like this story. lol And Spike and Buffy getting drunk together is awesome. I can't wait until either Buffy or Harmony gets their hands on Riley. Stupid bugger.
    Anyway, I love the story, keep up the great work, and update soon ^^
    Talk atcha later

    -Becky
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