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By : Suede
  • From asydnes on April 01, 2007
    Ah, so Spike is going to help them deal with the Mayor's Ascension plans, eh? Good stuff! I'm looking forward to the next installment! As for your question, I think the third person you're using here is just fine. If you want to slip into first person every once in a while though, using the standard Spike or Xander's POV notification in the body of the story would work well enough. :)

    *Mwah*
    Dae
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  • From ANON - Reese on April 01, 2007
    WOW!!! More of this is on the way right? Very nice start. ^_^ I think you've done a great job keeping everyone in character and moving the plotline on at an appreciable rate. Great job!
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  • From asydnes on March 25, 2007
    Spike keeping score between Peaches and the Slayer was priceless! I bet the poof will hear about that from his childe soon! I'm glad that the "in-laws" don't seem to upset about the relationship! On to the wooing!!! ;)

    *Mwah*
    Dae
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 25, 2007
    totally brill as always. looking forward to the next chapter you seem to have a great way of writing and it never stops making me chuckle.
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  • From ANON - Jiall on March 24, 2007
    Of course the poker players will have kittens, that's what they bet isn't it? This fic is delightful. Possesive Spike is interesting. Please continue.
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  • From lalie on March 23, 2007
    Hey, I'm so glad you decided to take up my challenge. It's looking great and I can't wait to see what the gang's reaction is!

    ?When I said to bring back anything that you thought might help they REALLY weren?t what I meant!!? -he he he loved it!
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  • From WarpedMinded on March 19, 2007
    please continue on the story. It is really good. I can't wait to see how Xander and Spike get closer! I am so happy!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2007
    Hey still really enjoying this and i can't wait for you next update
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  • From asydnes on March 17, 2007
    Poor Cruz! He was damned if he did and damned if he didn't there. ;) Can't wait to see how the "in-laws" react to the situation. Gosh knows Angel isn't dealing with it well, hehehe. :) And nope, I don't want you to write slower, lol. I rather like swifter updates myself. :D *hugs*

    *Mwah*
    Dae
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  • From AddictedtoBuffy on March 16, 2007
    Oh wow this is quite good I love the last little speech from Spike excellent. Can't wait to see where this will go. Keep going

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  • From asydnes on March 13, 2007
    Sorry, I'm just now catching up again with this fic. I loved the fact that you changed up the encounter with Faith, having Angel save her instead of Xander and adding Spike to the mix. ;) I'm also glad to see the watchers take responsibility for her this time. They should have done that on the show. *snorts* I'm interested in how Angel and Spike will respond to one another in the next chapter, particularly if Angel smells Xander's desire for Spike like Spike himself did. *chuckles* Next, please! :D

    *Mwah*
    Dae
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  • From ANON - Suzie Que on March 05, 2007
    ... I LOVE YOU! *hugs* more please? ... pretty please... with a cherry on top? no... how bout spike on top? ... wait I may want that myself... okay, I'll give you the pretty please with spike on top if you update soon. ^__^
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  • From ANON - Katus Kaijou on March 04, 2007
    it was good, but way to short.
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  • From ANON - Sammy on March 04, 2007
    Please please write more!
    I just love Xander!!!
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  • From ANON - Jiall on February 27, 2007
    Because Xander can no longer know the touch of a woman, I half expected men and/or demons by the dozen to pick up the slack. I am happy to see that only one male demon has shown interest. I look forward to reading more. Preferably with Xander realizing his cursed state.
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